When the Going Gets Tough ...

4/27/2017

Evan had mentioned last week that he would like another blog post featuring the characters that you had created. Evan, this one’s for you!

Isn’t it funny how life works? One week it feels like everything is great, going amazing and everything feels bright but then the next week can come, turn on you and everything feels like it’s crashing down around you. A huge part of life is not only the adversity and hardships that you will face but rather, how you deal with these hardships. Dealing with roadblocks and negativity is something that we can have our characters face in our writing as well. Think back to the character you created about a month ago. For your blog post this week, write a story where they face some form of a challenge (make it realistic, maybe something that could happen to you) and see how your character reacts to this challenge. Each character may react differently but finish the story so that their reaction contributes to the resolution of the story.

Kate

4/27/2017 04:05:28 pm

Rohr woke up to the sound of birds singing outside her window. The sun was already beaming down on the world below, and the sky was the perfect shade of robins egg blue. The breeze was slight and refreshing, and nothing seemed wrong at all. Only, everything was wrong. Rohr was going in for her fifth surgery, to fill in more of her missing leg bone. She had come to dread these annual surgeries more than anything else, but she grew stronger with every passing year. Rohr climbed out of bed and got ready for her walk to the hospital. It was short and uneventful, and she reached her destination within minutes. The surgery took exactly 4 hours and 23 minutes. Rohr was unsure if this was unusual, but noticed the signs of something wrong almost immediately. She was unstable, and found walking hard. Almost impossible actually. The doctors assured Rohr that this was normal, and she might take a few weeks, even months to adjust. Until then, she was confined to a wheelchair. But the worst part was the state of her face. The doctors had to realign the wires connected to her brain, and that took another surgery. On her face. With all the stitches and marks, Rohr looked like a survivor of a war. The kids were sure to make fun of her. And after she passed out at school like that, rumors were sure to be flying around anyways.
The rest of the day went by as always, and soon, another school day was upon her. Rohr wheeled herself to school, and did her best to ignore the stares. No one seemed concerned about her at all. On the contrary, all they wanted to do was call out, "Hey freak! Hey Frankenstein!" Rohr acted like she couldn't hear. "What, are you deaf too?" One kid called. Rohr sighed. The rest of the week came and went, with little change. Rohr had no friends; only tormentors. She didn't care. People rarely cared enough to even ask how her day was going. Rohr found her salvation in books. They told stories, made you laugh, made you cry, took you to every corner of the Earth, without ever saying a word. But soon, on her nightly trips to the library, she noticed another girl, puzzling over several novels. Rohr decided to take a chance. She snapped her own book shut, and wheeled her way over to the other girl. Her eyes were a concentrated blue, so deep you felt that if looked directly at them, you could drown in the sheer blue-ness of her eyes. Her hair was like a raven's wing, much alike to Rohr's. Her skin was like pale pink porcelain. "Do you need help?" Rohr asked.
"Yes actually," the girl replied. "I can't decide on what to read next." Rohr looked over the books for a moment before saying, "I'd go with The Secret Garden. I really liked it." The girl looked at the book then Rohr.
"Thanks," she said. "I'll try it." The girl picked up the book and walked over to an armchair. Rohr wheeled herself back to her original spot, and continued to read. The next night, she saw the girl again. Seven nights later, the girl approached her and said, "I finished the book."
"Did you like it?" Rohr asked. The girl nodded.
"It was amazing. I'm Sarah by the way." Sarah extended her hand.
"I'm Rohr." Rohr took Sarah's hand and shook.
"Rohr," Sarah said, turning the name over on her tongue. "Any other good books you know of?" Little did either of the girls know that this would be the beginning of a lifelong friendship. They would be bridesmaids at each other's wedding. They would go through divorces together. They would die in the same home. But that still leaves the story in between...

Tomas

5/1/2017 02:15:01 pm

In between what?

Emran HELPING ROY Sidekick Bob

5/4/2017 01:53:22 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

TICKET:::::::::::::::::::: Press enter 2 times for talking characters.

Kate

5/4/2017 06:21:29 pm

You only need to press enter once Emran.

Henry

4/30/2017 11:12:06 am

Prophet Tan open his eyes, he saw some police car "Look like I have some trouble today." He said.Tan is the most famous person in the word, because know what will happen before that thing happen. That make he get famous of course. But no one Tan can do that is because this is all acting, change a word, Tan just give lot of money for those people who want to know what will happen to make sure they will work together, so they just do what Tan let they do, so Tan can get famous. Now Tan know someone is say the truth about him. Tan look at the police car and say:"I think I don't need to give them money, but they can still go away."Then he just wail to the police car and talk to the police. After 10 minute the police car just drive away, they don't think Tan is lie, but they think the guy who say Tan is a liar is a liar.

BOB the defusing monkey

5/4/2017 01:54:36 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

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Con't

5/4/2017 02:10:27 pm

TICKET:::::::::::::::::::: GRAMMER, dude..

Qasim Blogs link

5/1/2017 04:13:17 pm

Jeff woke up with the sound of his mom waking him up.
"Today's the big day" she said, Jeff went downstairs and ate his breakfast. He has to take his exam in order to get in to get his university diploma. This was a big decision, if he did not pass his friends would make fun of him and ruin his career. Jeffs mom told him to start the car, she would be coming. The ride to the university seemed very long, Jeff finally reached the university. He came into the test room, taking his seat and opening his pencil pouch. The teacher gave him his test and he started the long 5 hour exam. At last he finished, giving his test and checking all his answers. Jeff was worried if he passed or not, he saw his mom come up to him,
"dont worry as long as you tried your best". Jeff felt better, he knew that he tried his best and he will get his diploma. Later on he does get an email about the diploma, and what do you know, he does get the degree and has a better life. He may have been nervous for his diploma, but the real thing is trying your best in everything you do. Jeff tried his best and got his diploma.
The end

Bob

5/4/2017 02:12:00 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

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Nathan

5/2/2017 01:51:30 pm

I stared at a formal white paper littered with words. None of them I liked. It mentioned that I was selected to go to Amsterdam for The school of the mentally Gifted. My Mom looked at my face as it became as pale as humanly possible. As much as I like it in Europe, I made a life for myself here. My Mom began to speak, but I walked out first. I sauntered out to my garage and went on a bike ride. Stress tearing at my mind. I never experienced this amount of confusion, stress and pain before. That letter ripped apart everything I knew. My home, my family, my life. But I'm not one to fight these people, and kids, that's why we live here now!
(Kids give my dirty looks)

Alex

5/2/2017 05:25:57 pm

as steve woke up he realized he had a test today.then he realized this test will help him pass high school.then he realized it was also his final test of the year.his mom who was calmly walkling towards me but then all of a sudden his mom starting to run like crazy as steve just broke something.then she said to steve you almost forgot something Steve said what did i forget then she said do you have your backpack steve said yes.steve went to the test room and after 6 and a half hours steve finished then steve saw a kid he really really dislikes his name jason i was running away but the kid looked like he wanted to beat me up so i hid in my locker till he left then steve ran home and told his mom and dad about the test during dinner then steve got ready for bed and then i remebered about the kid i woke up an then fell back asleep

Bob

5/4/2017 02:04:22 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

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Felicity

5/2/2017 07:29:40 pm

Isn't life just great the day before school ends you find out your mom is going to give birth in two days! I thought my mom was just getting fat but being a 14 year old I probably should have caught on to it by now, BUT I DIDN'T! Since my brother is in university I will have to babysit that thing, hear it cry all day and night long, oh and we can't forget the diapers that my mom will define try make me change! What am I going to do?

Bob

5/4/2017 02:15:07 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

TICKET:::::::::::::::::::: that my mom will define try make me change!, definitely try to make me...

Brian

5/3/2017 12:54:37 pm

Billy woke up in the morning and saw his brother beside his bedside he rolled over and saw his little sister on his other side, then he went back to sleep, he had a nightmare. He tore off his covers and got ready for school he ran out the door and sprinted to school. This was the first day of EQAO and he knew nothing he had missed over half the school year and if he failed he would not advance to next year.

Why wouldn't you make a character about the Elf Twink?

5/4/2017 05:05:49 am

Why wouldn't you make a character about the Elf Twink?

Juliana ( this is a real story that happend to me )

5/3/2017 05:23:06 pm

Dorothy woke up at 6;38 am and stared in bed, why do I have to go to school? ugh I have gymnastics today. great. well guess I have to get out of bed, I look up and there's a monster he attacks me blah blah random stuff the end... just kidding, here is the real beginning.

so one morning I woke up thinking it was the weekend, nope not the weekend it is Tuesday.. still have a while till I have to get out of bed, wait it is Tuesday??!!! anyways, I jumped out of bed with excitement for the day... ( WRONG, I fell out of bed and crawled downstairs with a blanket on top of me.) I went through the school day like the normal and when I got home I had to get ready for gymnastics, but I did not want to go to gymnastics.. I got ready went to gymnastics and both my coaches were in a bad mood so I already felt mad.. I tried to get through traning without falling but guess what, I failed, I fell on like everything and I could not even stand it. finally it came time to come home and I was so happy, I fell asleep on my couch and the next morning I told myself I was ok and I did it, the rest of the week was so amazing, the moral of the story was, some days are gonna be bad but then the next day is a new amazing day.

Bob

5/4/2017 02:02:38 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

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TICKET:::::::::::::::::::: traning ; Training (Brian is so happy right now)

5/4/2017 12:02:51 pm

Andrew

5/4/2017 12:35:09 pm

Billy woke to the first day of fall. It was time for his hockey tryouts. He might be small but boy could he skate. He could go circles around those guys, but he and another guy called Jake missed the first tryout. So they went to the second one. There was only one spot left on the team. When he saw Jake he thought he could never beat him. Jake was huge. He was 6 foot 3. Billy was 4 foot 9. During warm ups he saw that Jake could shoot like a rocket but when it came to skating he was the slowest guy on earth. So Jake was better at shooting and Billy was better at skating. It was a hard choice for the coach. Then all of a sudden one of the other guys on the team quit. He didn't want to play hockey so the coach had spots for both of them.

The end

Lin Xin

5/4/2017 12:59:37 pm

Nice! I'm just saying, but how does Billy know that Jake is good at shooting?

Lin Xin (My story is HORRIBLE!!! I had no ideas in my head)

5/4/2017 12:57:21 pm

Jo was late for school. She blamed it all on her little brother Bob. He had canceled EVERYONE'S alarm that morning so they all slept in. He had already done that twice before. Jo had been late the first two times. If she was late again, she would get a detention. She was very angry. She didn't want to spend ANY time in detention. She was angry. But, that was good. It made her run faster and in no time, she was at school. She wasn't late at all. Her brother also set the time forward! So, she wasn't late at all! She was 30 minutes early!

THE END!!!

Lin Xin (wow)

5/4/2017 01:01:33 pm

IT IS THURSDAY AND THERE ARE ONLY 14 COMMENTS??? AND WE HAVE THE SPRING CONCERT!!!

5/4/2017 01:05:45 pm

#everyone does there homework at 10:00pm

Ava

5/4/2017 01:02:11 pm

Brooklynn woke up to an outburst of pain. I recently broke my leg and I was still in a lot of pain. She crawled out of bed slowly and made it down the stairs. She has been at this school for a year now but everyday she still felt nervous. What would Harper thing of her? Would she still want to be my friend? Questions filled my brain. I ate breakfast slowly feeling more nervous by the minute. Soon it was time to leave. I rolled out the door on my new wheelchair and they used a special ramp to get me on the bus. "Sorry", I mumbled to the bus driver. 10 minutes later I was at school. I wheeled inside and headed to my locker. I could see kids looking at me. Some said words. Harper and I were now in different classes so hopefully I would not see here. I don't want her to see me like this. The hope ended almost immediately. When I was putting my books in my locker Harper showed out. "Hey" she called out. "Hi" I said quietly. She looked at me and her mouth opened wide. "What happened?" She whispered, not trying to draw attention. "Broke my leg" I said. "I look like an idoit". "No, you don't. She said back. "Really? So we're still friends?". I say. "Of course! Why would you think that?" I felt stupid, thinking Harper would be mad.
The rest of the day went smoothly and soon I was back at home.

Bob

5/4/2017 02:05:03 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

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Kate

5/4/2017 06:22:44 pm

You kept switching between third and first person.

Hudson

5/4/2017 01:04:52 pm

As my music teacher walked out of my house there was sweat beating down my forehead. Today my music teacher told me about a concert in a week and a half she would like me to play. She told me we were going to a senior center. As well for the seniors I had to play Pink panther and a Wonderful World, two songs I have never played before. Finally I was the only Soprano Saxophone there and the only Wind instrument there. Everyone else played guitar or piano

As the days went by I felt kind of calmer but then that changed. The nerve of fail is my flaw. As I walk into the senior home I gasped, it was so big. I couldn't believe it I had always thought they were like apartment buildings but there were so many things just as you walk in. I see my music teacher and she gestures me to come over. I came over and she told me where to sit and what time to play. I was last.

I buillt my sax easily. I sit in my spot for 15 minutes and the show starts. I wait for all the other people to go. 19 not including me. All playing songs the seniors would know, like Somewhere Over The Rainbow. Then my music teacher calls me up before I play I look around in the crowd and I see my family watching me. My dad is videotaping me. Then I start playing. After the two songs I felt so good. Everyone was surprised about how good I played and realized good things come from hard work.

Haya

5/4/2017 01:13:19 pm

Jolly
Jolly is funny ,smart and awkward
It was holly's first day of school
She woke up nervous I got dressed ,Ate breakfast🍞
Then she kept Telling her self (jolly today is the first day of school don't Embarrasse your self ) she got to school acting cool ( "coolentro) she was walking she didn't see the glass the she hit her head then fell saying NO!!! She got to class She was Ok till they had (First day of school Assembly ) she was walking she had to go to the washroom , the assembly was going till jolly went to the back of the board then fell and broke the board , she went home and went to be room and slept

Haya

5/4/2017 01:14:00 pm

Jolly 's

Bob

5/4/2017 02:06:51 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

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GRAMMAR POLICE

5/4/2017 05:46:53 pm

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Amy

5/4/2017 01:39:18 pm

June stared down at her blank sheet. She glared at the clock as a wave of anxiety crashed down on her. She has five minutes left. Five minutes 'till the teacher collects the sheets, five minutes 'till the end of the world. And that five minutes was the fastest five minutes in her life. Panic rose in her body as she hears the teacher's steps, she was sucked in a shaky breath, her throat constricted. Tears leaked out from her eyes. She wanted to bury her head. Everyone was staring at her, she couldn't stand it. So she ran as fast as she can away from the school, away from everything that ruined her life, feeling the mortification that follows her.

CCCCCCCCCConnor

5/4/2017 01:41:24 pm

I forgot my character [too lazy to check] So since I forgot my character I am just going to make a story up.

Cool, the name is col dude.
One day Cool woke up for the first day of school, the first day of school people say it was the hardest while some saying its easy, for me I have no clue. The morning I woke up I got ready But then fell on the couch playing video games, leading me to missing half the day of school. Once Cool got to school he walked inside his classroom and did what every first day of school had. Until the next day and feels like forever Cool was having the worst time of his life.
THE END.

Bob

5/4/2017 02:08:18 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

TICKET:::::::::::::::::::: ... the name is col, is to be Cool

Emran

5/4/2017 01:48:23 pm

The rain poured on my head as I woke up. Wait, what? My roof was ... Leaking.

'' Mom, there's water coming from a pipe.'' I said. '' The screw is probably loose.''

'' Will get it fixed, but for now, YOUR GONNA BE LATE.''

Minutes later...

'' Hu, uh, hu,'' I panted. '' a-ll-most- hu, uh, hu, th-ere.'' I slowed down,''Five minutes left.''

The mist outside was humid. The school lights came in dimmed through the fog. It was a tech day where we had coding periods.

5 periods later...

"No coding, whyyyyy!"

"Well today is a Wednesday schedule,"said Mr. Steltman.

"NOOOOOOOOO!'' I said.

But at least we went to Niagara falls that day. And soon we had a fixed pipe.

Bob

5/4/2017 02:08:46 pm

It is Bob, the bomb defusing monkey.

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Kate

5/4/2017 06:27:27 pm

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Evan

5/4/2017 02:13:38 pm

Today Fred accidentally threw my frisbee over a big gigantic fence. We’ve seen the people who live there, they’re not that nice. So it was a job for… Super Bubbles! But it would a huge challenge. It’s going to be hard to tell my parents that I lost my frisbee. It was a really good frisbee. It had my favourite thing, bubbles on the frisbee ring and it was a super sonic and glow in the dark and it only cost $12. I had to pay for it with my own allowance. I need a play date with Dorothy she lives the farthest from my home and close to the school and I was so close to making the ultimate frisbee team.

The final cut was today and last week I did really well. That was my favorite ultimate frisbee player Jenny Archibald signed frisbee. So then I whent to the try outs anyway so I did pretty well until Bobby one of the best of ultimate frisbee players showed up. Then we did team captains me and Bobby, I picked Evan and then Bobby picked Zack. Then everyone else got picked. I started with the frisbee then I chucked it down to Evan in Bobby’s end zone and he caught it and then we won 21-14. Then the coach went over to me and said “hey champ I have seen better days for you what’s up?” Well Fred chucked my frisbee over the humongous fence over there. It was my favorite ultimate frisbee player Jenny Archibald signed frisbee. “Well kid if you don’t make it I will give you another chance in gym schoolyard pick style next week before I will post the team or if you feel fine just tell me by tomorrow.” I had a really hard decision but I got a playdate with Dorothy.I whent to my house and somehow my parents got my favorite ultimate frisbee player Jenny archibald signed frisbee back I hugged and kissed them. Then I said to my gym teacher put up that list.

Then I walked past by the list and then my teacher Mr. Stelman said “You made it Bubbles and Evan did too. Congrats hopefully you do well this season.” We ended up to be undefeated champions and Dorothy she came to every game she is a cheerleader. My favorite ultimate frisbee player Jenny Archibald came to my championship games.

Daniel

5/4/2017 02:14:23 pm

Pluto continues with his adventure, and he has been transformed into a lovely kid (Zigzag). Zigzag is an unusual name, only named for the legends like Pluto. He was just a small ball, technically a small planet with super powers. Pluto got sacrificed, due to an earthquake. It happened several centuries ago and the parts are floating in space. "Zigzag will be the hero and a special kid that will meet my expectations." Says in the book.

*A new chapter of Zigzag*

Zig now goes to a public school, in the public quiet area. There are barely any cars driving past, but there are lots of apartments standing almost 2 blocks away. He enters the school, and he notices random people that he doesn't know. It is obvious, but he is feeling excited and a mix of queasiness. Meaning that he is feeling stress. "Oh no, who my teacher is going to be?" Zig or Zigzag kept thinking. After a minute, he founded a teacher (Mr. Q fart.) His name is very frivolous and uncommon, but he said to me "hi" in a positive manner. Unfortunately, Zigzag didn't find his classroom, because there are around 50 hallways! Around 30 minutes later, he didn't notice that the students in the class were doing EQAO. "Wait a second, why would we be doing EQAO at the first day of school? That is not LOGIC!" Zigzag talking and screaming.
"Don't worry Zigzag, it is just a test okay?" Mr. Q fart talking to him.
"But, I don't get it how will I do it?" Zigzag saying it in a loud tone.
"Zigzag, remember, you are a legend, you have the powers, just look at yourself. Look someone on the right, and look someone on the left, you will be okay Zigzag do you get it?" A magical book talking to Zigzag in his mind.
"Wait a second, I was a planet, wasn't I?" Zigzag asking.
"It is a myth, you can be anyone that is possible *cough, *cough."
"I don't get it."
"Don't worry, now go do EQAO. If you pass the test, I will give you a mission."
"What do you mean by mission?"
"Quest, a very important quest. It will be revealed as you finish EQAO."
"Hmm, uh, a square root of 9 is 3 I believe. Because 3 x 3 = 9 which it multiplies itself."
10 seconds later, Zigzag finished the test. "Phew, I am so proud. This was the first test I've ever completed so far!
"Great job, your quest will appear in a day." To be continued.

Layli

5/4/2017 05:42:14 pm

Kylie lived about a 10-minute drive from her school. It was too long for her to walk (bit lazy). Kylie didn't always make it to school on time and it started to embarrass her. At least two or three times a week she would arrive to school late and would have to walk into class late. Kylie made herself a goal, she said she would try to get to school on time every day. One morning Kylie's dad who goes to work early had left for work when Kylie woke up. Kylie was ready for the day and for her ride to school, her and her brothers got in the car with her mom. Her mom tried to turn on the engine and the car just wouldn't make a noise or move. It was pouring outside and there was no way for Kylie to get to school without getting wet. The umbrella Kylie had broke yesterday because it was windy and rainy and the wind broke it. Kylie thought if she's going to make it to school on time she's going to have to start walking. Kylie and her brother started walking the school they do not have an umbrella so they were getting soaked. Kylie got to school eventually, and she was late almost an hour late. Kylie was drenched and late she was so embarrassed to walk into her classroom but she had no choice, she put her stuff away in her locker and walked into her classroom, everyone was staring at her, she was so embarrassed…

Tomas

5/4/2017 05:58:57 pm

Timmy woke up in a bad mood, he stood up in his room looking out the window like someone had driven a nail through his foot. He walked downstairs past his parents, past his brother sleeping on the couch and to the kitchen to eat his cereal, after breakfast he walked to school but on the way someone called him a name,
“HEY! LOOK EVERYBODY IT’S A RAT! *SNICKER* LAUGH* SNICKER* Timmy had two pretty big front teeth and everybody called him a rat or a mouse some would even say “BUCKTOOTH BILLY” because they thought it was amazingly funny. He ignored them and walked into class where he was then called ugly when the teacher wasn’t in the class, eventually he just looked at people with emotionless eyes and overall face. It continued like this for several days until Timmy finally had enough, he walked down to the office and talked to the principle, all the kids were suspended except for Timmy’s first freinds Rushasa mrah, farcry loe, sudson molduck, gonner hayvison and devan shayward. They were given a small party.

Roy

5/4/2017 06:11:34 pm

Bob decided to try out for his school basketball team. He knew that he wasn't a very good player but he just decided to try for fun. When he wen't to the gym where the tryouts held, he looked around at all of the other students and saw that pretty much all of them were very tall and fit. Whenever he would try to shoot, they would always just simply lift their hand up and stop it. Whenever someone would pass the ball to Bob, (which was very rare) they would charge at him and steal the ball easily from his grip. Bob was about to just quit the tryouts and walk out of the gym when he remembered the reason as to why he came to the tryouts the first place. He came here to have fun! So he stayed and kept going until the very end. ( Bob didn't make the team though)

Thomas

5/4/2017 06:42:10 pm

Chad just punched Jeffy in the face, this was not a good thing. They just got out of gym class and Chad heard Jeffy talking behind his back, so he didn't think at all and BOOM he punched Jeffy in the face. Jeffy had a black eye and nose, Chad went to the office and said that Jeffy was about to break their promise of never talking behind each others backs. He was so mad at Jeffy that he didn't even apologize and he didn't ever want to talk to Jeffy again. Jeffy did steal money from him before too and those times Chad just let it slide, but this time he didn't. When Jeffy walked by Chad all he said was "your a loser" and Chad just pushed him and Jeffy pushed him back and they started a fight, soon enough most of the kids in the grade was there and was a on somebody's side Jeffy's, or Chad's. Right after the fight Jeffy stole Chad's phone and ran away with it and everybody agreed that Chad was a much better person than Jeffy in the the end. Soon Chad was one of the nicest in the grade and didn't talk to Jeffy because he was a stealer, but most of all because he wasn't nice.

Fixer

5/4/2017 06:43:58 pm

you're**, other's**

Jacqueline

5/4/2017 06:54:28 pm

Today will be Sophie’s first piano exam, and it’s at a church.
Sophie woke up early today, she got up from her warm, cozy bed and got dressed. She walked down the stairs and ate her breakfast… “It’s time to go!” Her mom said. When Sophie got to the church she was very nervous. As Sophie walked into the exam room, she saw an examiner sitting beside the piano. She quickly walked toward the piano and sat down on the bench. “Are you ready?” The examiner asked. “Yessss…” Sophie answered nervously. The exam was 15 minutes long… “Great job, Sophie.” The examiner said. “Thank you” Sophie said. Then she walked out of the exam door. Sophie finally completed the first piano exam!

Rumaysa

5/4/2017 07:04:08 pm

Halloween. the one, best time of the year for Toby. the sun was dawning on the quiet, quaint little town, sending down ripples of darkness melded with the little amount of light left. everyone was dressing up in various costumes, demons, ghouls, creepypastas, video game characters, and more. Toby was dressing up as a creepypasta who coincidentally had the same first name as him. as he set out to meet up with his friends, he felt uneasy. Toby brushed it off, heading off to the haunted house. he met up with his friends, who also went along with the theme of creepypasta, one going as Kate the chaser, another being the hoodie, and the last one as Ben drowned. "ready?" "ready." the four walked into the mansion. they were jump-scared countless times, like five nights at Freddy's on a 4/20 mode. nearing the end, a fault in electronic wiring caused the whole place to black out. since none of the four kids owned a phone, they could not pull up a flashlight. they slowly advanced through the mansion of a haunted house. at the very end, where a door was supposed to be slid open, it was jammed. Toby and Ben tried to pry it open. shortly after, the whole group joined in. Toby found a stick, and put it between the doors. everyone went through the door, Toby being last. the stick was under too much pressure, and it snapped. Toby's leg was caught between the two metal doors. he yelled, and his friends tried to pull him out, but to no avail. his leg was numbing, the flow of blood in the leg slowing, his bone becoming more brittle by the second. a hairline of a crack appeared in the bone before the owners of the house rebooted power and helped him out. they called his parents, and he was sent to the hospital. Toby was in a cast for two months, but is slowly recovering. Soon after the two months, Toby could walk and run normally. What Toby did not know was the challenges that he would face in the future….

Ameer

5/4/2017 07:17:32 pm

Judlefubdecup was reading a book when a light went on in his head he had a math test tomorrow that would be 50 percent of his math mark. Judlefubdecup studied throughout the whole night he fell asleep at 3 am. At 7:30 Judlefubdecup walked to school feeling nervous about his test. At school Judlefubdecup was taking his test he was working hard and taking his time. Judlefubdecup got a B+. This story tells a valuable lesson don't leave things to the last minute.

yara

5/4/2017 07:47:47 pm

Goorgy was in the car, going to her friend Maranda’s birthday party. Goorgy was very bored in the car, because her friend’s house was very far away. She was very happy to go to that party, but at the same time, the happiness made Goorgy feel sick to her stomach. Finally, she arrived at her friend’s house, and THERE WERE A LOT OF CARS in front of Maranda’s house. Goorgy was shaking with nervousness, and when she went to say ‘hi’ to Maranda, she saw a clown! Goorgy was very scared because she didn't know that there were clowns in Maranda’s party! She was scared of clowns. Goorgy didn’t know what to do. She went to Maranda, and told her she was scared of clowns, and she told Goorgy not to be scared of clowns because they are very cheerful.The clown was doing magic tricks and he wanted a volunteer to help him, so he asked Maranda to come up and help him, but instead Maranda wanted Goorgy to go and help him out.
Goorgy was shaking from fear, so when she was going closer, she felt herself shaking with every new step, almost frozen with fear. So the clown wanted Goorgy to go in a magic box. Goorgy went in the magic box and she was very scared that she would die, and that this clown would kill her. She tried her hardest to not cry when the door of the box was shutting. Goorgy closed her eyes and after 5 minutes the clown opened the magic box. Goorgy heard everyone clapping and smiling at her and she thought that it was not so bad after all! Goorgy overcame her fear, and she was feeling very happy and it made her feel better. She was ready to go enjoy the party.

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