Sharing Characters!

4/6/2023

First off, I need to say how impressed I was with your stories last week! Incredible work on using rough drafts, good copies and putting in so much detail in each of your stories and characters. For this week, I’d like us to take it further by using characters from our friends' stories, taking their personality traits and having them interact in a story with your character. Your story can take place anywhere but I would like you to have a focus on setting, and conversation. So make sure that you are using quotation marks appropriately. If you’re feeling stuck about how to use quotation marks, check out this resource.
To summarize your task once again, please choose at least one other character from one of your classmate’s stories. Read their profile and their flaws / faults. Once you feel like you know that character, create a story that includes their character and yours and have a conflict come between them. They can work against each other or together to solve a problem. Be creative but make sure you focus on conversation and setting.

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JACK

4/8/2023 01:22:06 pm

JIMMEY THE STAGE PERSON SPEAKS: Welcome, Welcome Everybody to the show. The scene that were about to show you, it actually happened, so just take it from me, so please pay Attention well I set the stage.

There were 2 boys, they were nice friends one was always smart and the other was too loud. The 2 boys names are Marco and Bing Bing. They always get along, well I mean sometimes. Most of the time they well pretty much work together on everything even if its at home or at school, no matter were they work they always do it together.

"Well Bing Bing I think it is time to go the mall."
"yes"

5 HOURS LATER THEY ARE AT THE MALL

"Ok Bing Bing I need to go to Kuku kiwi"
"UGGG I hate that store."
"Oh be quiet, Its not like you like them at all."

1 HOUR OF SHOPPING ITS 10:36 TIME FOR BED

"Have a good night Bing Bing."
"You to"

THE NEXT DAY

*yawns* "Yes I get to see Marco today and also we get to go to the water park YAAAAAAAYYYYY

LATER

*knocks on Marcos door* "UMMM Hello, anybody there".
"HMMM were is he cause nobody answered the door, That's weird".
"Finally somebody's opening the door
Marcos Grandma Speaks: "Hello boy, why are you here"
"I'm here to see Marco?"
"Oh Marco, he broke his lower body, so he is in the hospital with his mom and dad, also it looks like he is going to be in the hospital for 11 Years."
"Oh Okay, I guess il go home now."

BING BING CRIES FOR 1 HOUR

JIMMEY THE STAGE PERSON SPEAKS: Well folks that's the end
hope you enjoyed. Are next show will be on April, 17th 2023, so come back and we will have another show for you the next time.

Luke 0_0

4/11/2023 04:28:38 pm

Joey ran to Bob's house to play soccer on Tuesday and even tough it was raining he didn't care. When he arrives at Bob's door he knocks loudly and Bob appears, and say "ugh you" and slams the door in his friend Joey's face, and Joey did not understand what was going on to make him so mad. Joey knocked again at the door and Bob's mom answered. He asked her why Bob's was so angry and she replied " he gets really gloomy on raining days" . Joey comes up with a plan, he asks Bob's mom if they can play soccer in the basement of his house. Bob's mom answered "That's a great idea Bob will love that!". Joey ends up going inside and Bob comes out and is happy to play soccer inside, they were both had so much fun!

Yasma

4/12/2023 03:09:02 pm

One afternoon, Sunday was really bored. She was thinking of what she should do. A thought came to her mind, and she said “Got the perfect idea! I can call my friend from class and see if they could come over.” She calls Luna and Autumn and they said “Yes of course we can.” When they arrived, Sunday asked if they wanted ice cream. Luna and Autumn both excitedly said yes. They all went over to the new ice cream shop that was just around the corner of Sunday’s place. .When they walked in, Sunday knew exactly what she wanted, an ice cream sundae with extra rainbow sprinkles. Autumn wanted two scoops of pecan ice cream. Luna didn’t know what they had until she walked in. She saw something amazing which was a galaxy ice cream with golden star sprinkles. When they got their ice cream, they all started eating it. All of them said “Mmmm that’s the best ice cream I’ve ever had.”

tonquavious barbarious the 589th

4/12/2023 03:24:20 pm

Ok so this is the story of robotic and yoop

It starts off when robotic was just playing games and then he went outside for a bit then he went to go eat and then he did not even noticed that he got a call from yoop and then when he called yoop and he did not answer then he thought "jeez he is so unpredictable"but LITTERLY 3.7 seconds later he gets a call from yoop and he is like okay that was weird and then he answered it and he got asked by yoop wanna go skydiving and robotic said sure. After that he asked what time and then he got told 5 so he went there and then he realized he had to go see bob at 6 but before that they had a argument about what was better a tomato soup or a sandwich and then right after that robotic tried to keep making jokes but he just got told to shut up. After that when they we're going out and then he had to go over to the resturant so in the air he went there and after that he wondered where he went but they stayed friends.
and so class that was the story of robotic and yoop ,any queations.

Matthew

4/12/2023 05:56:22 pm

On a very nice and sunny day Marco was just walking down of his school. Then he meets his very great friend BingBing at class. Later that day BingBing asked Marco if they could go to the mall. "Hey Marco would you like to go to the mall" "of course, YEAH". So apparently the closest mall was 2 hours long and they had to ride their bikes because their parents were running to get milk. So anyway bikes are slower than cars so they made it in 5 hours and the time was 9:35 pm. Anyways Marco wanted to go to KUKU KIWI. "BINGBING I WANT TO GO TO KUKU KIWI", "UUGGH I hate that place", " come on Bingbing it's not that bad". One hour of shopping later 10:36 pm they decided to go home."BYE MARCO", bYe BongBong", Marco said sleepily. Marco was so sleepy that he fell down the stairs crashed through the door and fell right infront of his dad that went to go get milk. Marco didn't even notice that he broke all of his lower body. They went straight to the hospital and the doctor said he had to stay there for 11 years. The next day Marcos grandma called and said "Marco your friend came and he was looking for you" "just tell him that I went to Ohio", " I already told him about your lower body, " WHAT NOOOOOOOO"!!
Moral of the story, never go boking 5 hours to a mall late at night.

kenzie p

4/13/2023 12:36:40 pm

A FEW WEEKS AGO -

A few weeks ago, Athena had entered a math contest and in the result of winning she got two tickets for Niagara Falls. The only problem is she doesn’t know who to take with her to Niagara, because she doesn’t have many friends. A few weeks later, she only had two days to decide who she’ll take with her to Niagara Falls.

PRESENT DAY -

Athena was walking down the sidewalk to the bus station. Once Athena got in the bus, she arrived at the grocery store called MartWall, which really was just a ripoff of Walmart. She went there to pickup a snack for her big trip. Athena saw the chips, and there was one bag left of Cheetos, her favourite! Luckily it was the big size, so if she did end up bringing someone on the trip, there’d be enough chips. The moment Athena grabbed the bag so did another person! At the exact same time she did. “Hey! I picked it up first!” The person beside her said. He looked annoyed, and desperately tugged on to the bag waiting for a response. “No, I did!” Then her and the man started fighting for the chips. Athena knew what to do in a tough situation like this. She pulled hard enough at the bag so the person let go, and ran to the fire extinguisher in the store. Athena sprayed the fire extinguisher all over the man, and he was so mad! The cashier rushed over and kicked them out of the store, as they never got to pay for the chips.

“Because of you, we didn’t get those chips!” The man said. “No, I grabbed them first! And because of you, I won’t have an amazing snack for my grand trip to Niagara Falls!” Athena complained back. “No need to brag!” The man said. “But.. Can I come?” He asked. “NO!” Athena said. “OF COURSE NOT!” Those Cheetos were mine. “What if I rushed back in the store and got them for you. For free! Then could I come?” He asked. Athena thought and thought and thought about the question until it was dark. “Sure” She replied. The man rushed back in the store, retrieving the Cheetos, and once again world peace was conquered!

- THE MORNING OF THE TRIP -

The day before the trip, both Athena and the man decided to meet at the garden to discuss what they’d packed. They discussed what they brought, and it was final. They had everything they needed! The man and Athena walked over to the taxi and got in. During the ride, everything was quiet but Athena finally asked the man “what’s your name?” She asked. “My name is Joe,” He said. “What’s yours?” Athena replied. “Athena. Nice to meet you!” She replied. “You too.. but um, is the taxi driver going to take a turn?” Athena and Joe looked ahead to see the taxi they were in was going straight for a cliff! “STOP THE CAR!!!!” Athena yelled at the taxi driver. “Huh?” He replied, waking up from his SLEEP! “Oh yeah sorry. I just fell asleep..so, I thought the car was automatically driving itself but I guess I forgot to turn the automatic button on. I guess since we’re about to drive off a cliff I’ll be late for my date tonight but that’s okay. I’ll only miss about 5 minutes, since it isn’t f- Athena inturuptted the driver. “TURNN!!” She yelled. Instead, they crashed into the ocean. The bus driver was dead, but they needed to get out of the car before they were dead too! Joe raced to the car door and bit it off. They came up to the water to get some air. “YOU CAN EAT CAR DOORS! If you can eat anything, you should of just told me! Then we would have never fought over the Cheetos in the first place!” Athena said out of breath. “Yeah yeah! We need to use the top of the car as a boat. I have paddles. You never know when you are going to drive off a cliff on your way to Niagara Falls. It’s a life lesson to always have paddles handy!” Joe said.

Athena and Joe spent the next 5 hours on the so called “boat” and ended up in a whirl pool. Due to unexpected weather, they were sucked in a tragic death. The two were never seen again.

THE END

ганзориг

4/13/2023 02:04:56 pm

The worst day ever.

Click: "Hello, there BENJAMIN,"

Benjamin: "Hello!"

Click: "Are you ready to go to my birthday?"

Benjamin: "Of course I am! I'll be there in about 5 minutes Click,"

Beep Beep

Today was Click's birthday. I was so excited that I forgot to bring his favorite Mexican cheese. I'm in my dad's car right now, driving to Click's birthday party...

Beep Beep

Click: "Are you there yet?"

Benjamin: "No...."

Click: "Can't you guys drive a little faster?"

Benjamin: " 'Sigh' I'm gonna ask my dad then,"

Click: "O.K.! See you soon."

*Sigh* there it was again. I asked my dad to drive a little faster, but he refused.

Then I saw a bear staring at us as we drive. He started to chase us, but the bear was too slow, and dad didn't know. Until, something made dad stop from driving.

Benjamin: "Dad, what's going on? Why'd you stop?"

Dad: "We have to go back..."

Benjamin: "What?! Why?! We're going to Click's birthday party!"

He didn't reply. He turned back and drove back home.

Benjamin's thought: 'Well, this is unexpecting,"

So I asked dad one more time what was going on, and he finally said,

"O.k. But don't get angry,"

Benjamin: "Psshhhhhhhhhhhhh! I'm not going to get angry just tell me already right now."

Dad: "I turned back because the sign says the street was closed, there where no other way to go to your friend's birthday party, and you for got his gift..."

Benjamin: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"

The end

Presley

4/13/2023 05:22:12 pm

Hi my name is Chloe and I love chocolate covered donuts. I am at the airport with Luna. We are waiting to get onto our plane to Paris, France. It's been so long since we have left but Luna and I are very excited. Luna and I were going to go sit next to the place where you scan your ticket so we don't miss our flight. But then a few seconds later I started getting hungry because it just turned to 9:30. So I asked Luna if she wanted anything and she said no. Luna said I am not hungry because I don't like to eat any food. I only eat certain foods. So I said ok come get me if our plane is about to leave. Luna said Ok! So I went to go get a sandwich and I went back to our seats and Luna wasn't there. So I thought well she said if our flight was about to leave she would come and tell me. So I looked up at the screen and it said the last flight that took off was to New York and I said to myself what she would have gone to New York and our flight is at 10: 17. So I tried calling her and she answered on the 4th time. Hey where are you? I'm on the flight. I asked. To New York. WHAT WHY NEW YORK I thought we were going to go to PARIS FRANCE? I wanted to see the stars and sunset and sunrise when it's night time. Why didn't you tell me? Well I didn't want to bug you. Bug me well I didn't know where you went. Ok well now I don't know what to do.

Well you can come to New York. In New York all I want to do is have CHOCOLATE COVERED DONUTS. Well you still can? NO I want to have my CHOCOLATE COVERED DONUTS at a FRENCH BAKERY. OK well the next flight would be at 7:30 tonight. Ok well I'm going to still go to Paris but I will call you later and have fun looking at the stars. Ok, have fun eating Chocolate Covered Donuts. Thanks Bye.

Ok well that was unexpected but um let's get on this flight.

Ahh I just got into my hotel in Paris. It was an okay flight. I have a big headache because the plane was very noisy but I think it's time to go to bed. It's been a LONG day. Chloe, Chloe, Chloe Um I don't know why she won't pick up I guess it is 10:18. So I am Luna. I love exploring the solar system and examining all different types of stars but I'm at the New York airport and I am trying to get on the next flight to surprise Chloe. Hopefully she likes that I'm finally coming. Okay it's 10:30 the flight is leaving at 10:47 hopefully I make it this time.Yes that's me flight to Paris France let's go. Okay it's the next day I got off the plane last night at 12:58 and I'm about to call Chloe and then surprise her.
Hey Chloe I haven't talked to you in a while. How are you?

Good but I miss you a lot.
Same but good and bad news which one first
Bad I guess
Ok so bad news is I can't get on a flight until Tomorrow morning
Oh no, maybe I should come to New York?

Nooooo Stay there
Um What's the Good news then

Just wait where you are okay
Okay

Chloe looked out the window and looked through the door what is about to happen
Chloe heard a knock at the door hmm who will this be

Chloe opened the door

Noooooo Luna What , what are you doing here

I came to see you and I thought I could see the stars shine brighter here in front of the Eiffel Tower

Yes Yes I agree

Luna hugged Chloe

Luna said to Chloe

Chloe I am so sorry for what I did
Chloe said oh it's fine we all make mistakes

Luna said hey Chloe want to go get some lunch I have a good place

Yes but I thought you didn't like food

Oh I don't but I haven't ate all day let's go eat something

Chloe said sure but where are we going

you'll see said Luna

And Luna and Chloe walked down the street

after you said Luna

Wait a second are we at

Yep

okay said Chloe but I thought

I know I want to try one

Okay

Chloe went up to the stand to order Hi can I please have two chocolate donuts
Yes anything else that's all

Thanks have a good day

I can't believe this
I know me either

So they got their donuts and sat down

Okay here goes nothing
Oh my gosh this thing is so good how what where

I know this is why you wanted to come to Paris, France because this donut is so good.

Thanks Luna you're such a good friend.

You're welcome.

Okay ready to go back to the airport sadly our trips over
Sure
When They got to the airport

This time stay with me said Chloe
Okay said Luna

They walked up and got their tickets

Are we on the right flight this time

Yes said Luna

Thank you so much again for coming Said Chloe

Your Welcome I see why you wanted to go and I enjoyed every part of this trip

Me two said Chloe

THE END!

And that is my story. I hoped you liked it.

Aikam

4/13/2023 06:11:47 pm

It was a sunny evening and Autumn was walking threw the park listening to her favourite song BANG by AJR when suddenly she saw someone sitting on her bench that wasn't just anybench that was THE BENCH the one she always sits on every sunday evening . she walked closer and saw a girl eating chocolate covered donuts. she walked up closer and it was from a french bakery she had never seen that girl before she turned off the music and walked up closer to the bench and sat down .

"Excuse me " Atunmn said shyly
'huh SPEAK UP I cant hear you"
Atunmn felt nevours how could she talk to this person she had never talked to people before - only the people she knew- but still this was a person
"Um..." said the girl
"C-can -I - sit there" said Atunmn very slowly
"Sure!" she said
"My name's Chole What's your Name I like dounuts well choclate covred one's especalily " Chole said very rapidly .
"Uh-erm.." Atunmn Replied
"Do you at lest like Icecream?"
"OH yeah I love pecan Icecream It's my favourite My-My names Aa- Atunmn "
"Nice to-"
Just then They heard a little sound from above a girl there age came down froma UFO her dress was flowing with the screen of space what looked like to Atunmn and she had to diffrent earings on each ear
every body in the park ran away scearming except the two girls who wanted to be friends with the mysrtoius space queen.
They looked around to see where she went and then turned around.
"BOO!" The space girl yelled
"AHHHHH" chole screamed
Atunmn began to cry "SnIfF -SnIfF "
"oh please don't cry We just met the name 's Luna
"Nice to meet you luna what do you like to eat"
"I-I don't eat" Luna said
"HaHa" Cgole said laughing
" no serouisly I don't "
THE END

spider monkey

4/14/2023 05:11:16 am

It was a bright sunny day and Joe-
JOE ATE MY SCRIPT AGIAN!!
anyways lets continue...

Joe was at the park on a sunny day tryning not to touch the grass. He watched the other unrecognizable kids running around screaming like gorrilas. Suddenly a girl Joe actullay knew arrived at the park and lets just say aftr some dramatic outbursts she might've accidently broken the entire park. Joe searched his small head for the name of the classmate not realizing that she was wlaking over to him. "Your actullay afriad to touch grass". She said. At that moment Joe remebered her name. Athena. "I'm not afriad I'm just ALLERGIC to grass". Joe said defensivley. Well your obviously gonna have to touch it so... Athena grabbed his foot without finishisng her sentence and flinging him into the grass."AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Joe screamed as he squirmed around in the grass. Athena walked away iconicly and Joe rolled off the grass and ran back to his bench. "I hate grass". He whispered to himslef.

Personally I think Athena was helping Joe by throwing him in the grass I mean if he's afraid of GRASS he's never gonna have a li-

-BANG BANG BANG-

Well I better go I think thats Joe breaking the table....

Aaliyah :) The Donut

4/14/2023 03:00:45 pm

Petal was walking to Mayfair with her best friends. One of her friends' names is Click and Click loves to eat mac and cheese. Her other friends’ name is Athena and she loves to eat cookie dough. They were walking when they saw a burger and fries shop, so they got 3 b burgers and 1 order of fries. After that they sat down to eat their food. As they were looking around they saw a girl that was sitting by herself at a nearby table. So Petal, and Athena walked over to her. Petal said hello, are you ok? My name is petal. Then the girl said, ‘no l am not ok! my friends left me here and l have no idea where to go and my name is Jamie’. Athena and Click quickly introduced themselves too. Next Petal said to Jamie, "Do you want to go on a ride with us?" And Jamie said yes! Click suggested that they all go on the coolest new ride called ‘Water Doom’. They were all cheering and super excited to go on this ride that was so fast, tall, and so exciting.
So they went on the ride and had an amazing time. Once it was over Jamie was hungry but all of her new friends, Petal, Athena and Click had already eaten. After a short discussion they decided that while they couldn’t afford to have another big meal they could afford a snack. All of the friends decided that the best snack option was for a vanilla ice cream cone from the ice cream truck. They each ordered the ice cream cone of their choice and sat down to enjoy. Afterwards, they went to the carnival to play lots of games. Petal won a yellow duck, Click won a plant. Athena won a face mask kit and Jamie got the set of Harry Potter books. It turned out to be a great day at Mayfair and Jamie was super happy she made new friends that she forgot all about her problem to begin with.

Kenzie .R.

4/16/2023 12:02:09 pm

As Luna sits on the edge of one on the rotating rocks on Saturn, she is lonely. She thinks about what it would be like if she had more friends. "I wish I had more friends. *sigh*"
"I think I can help with that." said a floating old lady in the sky. She was wearing a lavender coloured shall, and dark blue crocks.
"Huh? Who are you?"
"I think the real question is who are yoooooou"
"Umm... I'm Luna."
"Great! Ok, now that we got the names down-"
"Wait!" Luna interupted.
"What?"
"You didn't tell me who you were."
'Oh. Right." she said, "Well, if you insist- I'm Huhuwallelayh"
"Huhu what-wa-what?"
"Nobody can ever say it!" the old woman exlamed. "Fine. Just call me Helen."
"Ok." replied Luna.
"Anyways- you said you wanted to go down to earth and meet some new friends?"
"Well not exatly bu-" she started.
"Good, good. Well I can do that!" she told her, "BIP BAP BOP!"
"I feel weird," said Luna. "What did you do to me?"
"Now, now." hushed the old lady. "You don't have much time to talk before you get sent down to earth."
"WHAT!" Luna exlamed.
"Yeah, yeah. You'll like it down there. Have fun!"
"Woah!

to be continued...

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