Scarily Descriptive!

10/17/2017

As we are coming up to a SCARY event next week, I thought I would use this picture of myself from a few years ago to TERRIFY you, and get you into the right mindset for your weekly blog writing. This week you have a choice of what to write about.
Using PROPER PARAGRAPH form, you can either write:
From the perspective of a child going through a very scary haunted house for the first time, including everything they would hear, feel, barely see, etc.
or
You can describe the scariest costume you can imagine. Include clear descriptions of colours, looks, everything. This can be a costume that you've worn, want to wear or just thought of.
The goal for this is for you to practice your descriptive writing and using different, powerful adjectives that will help you TERRIFY your reader. Transport them to the haunted house, or create the costume in the mind so they quake with fear. Good Luck! MWAH-AH-AH!

Dat Dogo Queen DD

10/19/2017 02:37:39 pm

First of I just wanted to say THAT PICTURE MAKES U LOOK LIKE A LALA LOOPSY DOLL

a world with no i's Adth

10/19/2017 02:59:52 pm

Have you ever been trick or treating and you just walk up to a house and the person giving out candy is in a really scary costume, well I have and it is horrible.
You're just trick or treating with your bro and you go up to a house to ask for free candy, you know, like you do and you walk up to this one house and there is a lady sitting outside wearing a ripped dirty white dress, barely moving, so still you couldn't even tell that she was actually human and all you think is "Oh no, it's after me." But you still NEED CANDY so you approach the house on the very tips of your toes ready to run at any second. But the second you approach the house 2 dirty gray hands slowly come out of the ground as if being pulled out by a magnetic force and you just drop your candy bag and think "and death" but then you pick up your candy bag and the lady's electricity goes out and the hands fall down back into the ground and you just feel like "YES" and you take you candy and leave

Owen

10/19/2017 03:13:53 pm

When Jerry walked walked into the abandon house he heard a creeeeeeeeek, as he slowly tip toed he heard something coming down the hallway it was a giant shadow. The lights were flickering on and off ether someone or something was doing or the power was going out. All the sudden he heard someone say his name and then there was a blackout...

Romina

10/19/2017 03:15:30 pm

(Kids Perspective) I was going to a haunted house that had just opened on bloor street. I creeped carefully into the grey building with flickering lights. The room looked empty, dark with no sign of anyone. A clown called Pennywise jump scared me. I'd remember him from the movies with his pale face painting and scary red hair. "AHHHH" I shrieked at the top of my lungs. I knew in my mind it was going to get worse. I could just picture all the posibilities that could come to scare me. I entered another empty room but this time it had red streaks on the walls. Another person came out and startled me. It was a dog with a super cute costume with a green monster hat. I was relived at the moment and I had totally forgotten that it was a haunted house. After a few more jump scares I'd finally get out of this creepy place. I rushed through the door and promised myself I would never go back.

Juliet

10/20/2017 01:51:42 pm

My Scary Costume
As the blood drips down the side of the face, bleeding screams come from the sky. The bright red lips go on as the fiere of little children increasing. The eyes are like a black cat trolling through the night. As the screams continue, the bloody red keeps on going down the body. The dead blue shoes go as long as a roller coster.
Now you know i am a clown!

Team AA (Alex T.)

10/21/2017 08:52:03 am

(kids view) I was walking into a terrifying haunted house! As I walked in I saw flickering lights and creepy sounds. The whole house was gray. I stopped and looked around. Nobody was inside. I continued trotting. Then outa nowhere this bloody clown with a knife jump scared me. I shrieked and said “ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” and sprinted as fast as I could. When I calmed down and walked into a different room. There I saw blood dripping from the walls. Also there were strange sounds like “come and play with us” and “die!” I ran as fast as I could out of that room. I saw a spiral staircase leading to the attic. I walked up the stairs. First there was complete darkness and silence. Then I felt something touch my face, then again and again. Suddenly the lights turn on and I saw hundreds of bats flying over me. I started waving my hands while at the same time trying to cover my head. Then I saw the exit. It was a slide down. “Thew, finally all done”. I was about to go down the slide but another bloody clown with a chainsaw jump scared me. I screamed “ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!” and jump on the slide. I said to myself “I will never ever go inside that haunted house again” and ran to find my parents.

Alex.A ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

10/21/2017 12:50:30 pm

(Kids View) One time I was going to a haunted house in Toronto with my parents because it was my first time and when I went in it was pitch black and it smelled like blood. I went into the first room and in the middle there was Annabelle sitting still slowly rocking in a rocking chair holding a knife and a puddle of blood around her. Annabelle started talking and she said " come and play little one" and when I turned around to see my parents, they were gone! so know I was stuck in this creepy room with Annabelle walking towards me and with every step she said " come with me" and when she got to me she blindfolded me and threw me into the next room. That's when someone took the blindfold off me and what I saw made me want to run away but when I tried I noticed that my hands and feet were cuffed to the chair. I saw penny wise, the killer clown from the movie It. When I saw the exit I ran and somehow I got out of the chair and when I got out I was like "phew, I will never go in there again". I went to look for my parents and of course I found them almost drunk in a wine shop!

HYELLO AVA

10/22/2017 08:06:33 am

On a Sunday when Mika, Juliet, Maddy, and I went to Niagara we shivered with fright, very curious what was going to happen when we walked in Haunted Tunnels. We were getting ready to use our voices to scream, but hoping we wouldn't lose them! Soon enough we walked in the room of fright, not knowing what was going to happen was worse. After 30 seconds in we realize it was just one person scaring us and that it wasn't that scary anymore but you just felt like screaming!

Jumaana

10/22/2017 09:05:03 am

Creeeeak! I tiptoed slowly through the darkness as I clutched my trick or treating bag. I had no Idea what was up ahead. I saw in the darkness a sign that said 'Beware of what is ahead, for you may end up DEAD'. A chill went down my spine. As I kept walking through a skeleton popped out of nowhere. AHHH! I ran as fast as I could passing everything to get to the end. Huff! Puff! I saw light through the darkness. I ran toward it. The doors suddenly started to close. I jumped through them right before they closed. It was finally over. At least I thought it was over. I found myself in another haunted house...

Jack

10/22/2017 09:11:51 am

One day my friend and I went to knock on someone's door. As we got closer we noticed that there was someone sticking their head though the door! We noticed that her head fell off and we saw a trail of red sticky blood as it rolled away. She was screaming I don't give candy! At the end we realized that it was just a costume with a voice recorder and a sphere shaped mask on the out side of it and the glue that was died red!

Tom

10/22/2017 11:08:17 am

Imagine grey and yellow hair, a blood thirsty face and a ompa lompa,type skin color.Also a flat a weird stely of cloths.Miss match socks this is petrefeing anything in a 1 mile radius.This is a costume of...Donald Trump.

MY NAME IS NOT WILLAN

10/22/2017 01:44:30 pm

(Kids View) As I walked into the spooky house I heard someone or something whispering my name and as I was walking I was thinking how does it know my name? At that moment the lights flickered a bit and then they turned off, at the time I was with my brother, Grayson and he said to me "it's not safe here we need to get out". We were trying to find our way out in the dark but if you didn't know, it's not easy. We heard some giggling in the other room. It was some sort of kid, my brother said he would check it out. As he walked into the room I heard a scream and I was so worried at the same scared! I walked slowly into the room and what I saw was horrifying... I saw his bleeding head and he had no eyes, there was a note scratched on the board saying "your next" and I ran as fast as I can outside the door but then I saw a doll sitting down with a bloody knife in its hand and then it..... (p.s. she died)

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10/22/2017 03:26:41 pm

Sam slowly crept onto the porch of the scariest house in the world, he crept through the door and saw some thing that totaly scared him. There was a huge shado coming towards him, he ran behind a coffin that was sitting in the corner, and as soon as the shado disapered he came out. The lights started to flicker and then it was pitch black....

SPOOKY HAMSTER

10/22/2017 04:02:22 pm

Me Ava, Juliet and Maddy all went to a haunted house together. When we first walked in to the screaming tunnels there was a fake clown hanging from the ceiling and someone behind pushed it and me and my frinds all screamed as we walked in more there was flashing lights and someone screaming and this guy making weird scary sounds like a wolf dying or a monster and I new it was him because I saw him behind me with his hands on his mouth yelling and making weird sounds in my ear. My mom was at the front of the line and we were all together behind her. It was Pitch black we couldn’t see anything but there is little lights at the top of the ceiling that showed where were supposed to walk then we finally saw the exit door and ran out.

CLAIRE:)

10/23/2017 02:22:27 pm

Its Halloween again. Is time to trick or treat.The ultimate time, We went trick or treating, and after a few minutes of getting delicious treats,I saw the scariest costume, it was hairy and brown /white. It was a "goatamigoisdousae," a spooky Spanish monster . It had giant red bulging eyes.it the scariest thing I have ever seen in me life.

Pennywise the danceing clown/David

10/24/2017 03:27:31 pm

The face, the frightful face with white paint like a tissue straight out the box. The mouth the red bloody mouth, with teeth sharper than saber teeth. The eyes a very ugly yellow with blue paint over those ugly eyes. The hair is red and curly and is red as a watermelon.

Cadence

10/24/2017 03:32:43 pm

The spooky costume i'm thinking of is a blood thirsty wolf with blood shot eyes and a bony body It would also have barely enough fur to keep it warm and all of the hair on its body would be covered in blood. That's not it, it would also be half bobcat but the bobcat part would be dripping with blood that leaves a trail of red goo behind.

LILAH!!!!!!!!!!

10/24/2017 04:49:10 pm

The scariest costume i could imagine was a man with ripped up shirt and dark blood stains going down his arms and a scar starting at his elbow down to his hand. The face would have a scar that goes in between his two glaring eyes and a scratched up red mouth and the person would have ripped up jeans with two holes on the knees.

Emma.J:)

10/25/2017 05:51:42 am

It's time to start trick or treating again and this is what I think a scary costume would look like. It would have red eyes with black hair and a bloody dress and it was sooooooo hairy and its fur was black it was also very tall with sharp claws

Alex Y

10/25/2017 04:49:37 pm

The single scariest costume I could ever think of is one with a bleeding ghost mask with blood all over it. It would have eyes that make a crescent shape and a mouth that's drooping down and all covered in blood. It would also have a long black robe and will all be covered in blood

DatDogoCiaran

10/25/2017 05:45:43 pm

Try to imagine in your head the most terrifying Halloween costume you have ever seen and times it by ten and that's what I'm going to describe to you!!!

Its beady, glowing red eyes make you wish that you never saw them. Its face is pale as snow and it wears a torn black cloak with long ripped sleeves. The cloak is all shriveled up and it has a beaming, silver skull and cross bone at the middle of the black, leather belt with a menacing grin from ear to ear. It has blood dripping from its pale, almost blue fingertips and its hood covers the tops of his eyes. It has a long necklace with an eye on the end of it. It has long, black, leather, scaly boots going up to its knees. His fingers are lanky and they have long, dirty fingernails. It iis the most terrifying thing you could ever see and if you saw it, you would want to run away back home.

dogo dude\Kevin

10/26/2017 03:54:54 pm

Have you ever bean trick or treating with your friends and saw a house
and you were all like oh it is just a normal house nothing to a frade of
then you walk up the drive but half way you notice that there are 3 super scary with torn clothes with no eyes hoer fiying grim
reper statues then you go up the drive way more then when you kind of
walk past them thay jump out at you!!! then your like i need to get my candy and go in your mind.

Jacob

11/1/2017 07:16:55 pm

One Halloween I walked in to scary house. When I got into the haunted house and when I walked in the door slammed shut and the lights started to dim and then it blacked out then the wooden tiles started to creek and then I saw a light coming from the up stairs so I went up stairs and then the lights went back on so I ran back down stair and I went to the door but right when I got there a clown blocked the door and pulled a knife out of his pocket and started to walk toward my so I started to run up and down me but I hid in a closet by the door and I had it a creek open so I could see where he was going and then he was right in front of the closet but he luckily passed it so when he went up stairs I ran out the door but the clown heard me so he ran down stairs and chased me but lucky I got out and when I got out I ran home and never went to a haunted house again.

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