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9/22/2016

This week we have been focussing on writing catchy, powerful introductions that hook your readers into reading our recounts. For your blog post this week, I would like you to write an introductory PARAGRAPH (only 1) that will set up the telling of the news story that goes with the picture beside. This paragraph should accomplish three things:

Hook the reader
Introduce the who, what, where, when, and how
Use descriptive language (5 senses!)

The challenge here will be to write your introduction as if it's a news story or magazine article. Be sure to give your article a catchy TITLE!
For Example: Scientists notice strange phenomenon taking place! Animals addicted to smelling flowers!

Amy

9/23/2016 12:22:00 pm

Have you ever wondered why all the animals like to smell flowers? Well today I'm going to tell you. If I ask you, there will be a lot of answers. The animals might like their smell, the animals might need them, and the animals might even be sick and need them to survive! There's different kinds of imaginations and answers, but which one is the truth? Today I will give you the answer to this question.

Kate

9/24/2016 01:27:23 pm

Latest News! Animals Have Taken to Smelling Flowers!

Have you noticed different animals smelling flowers lately? Well, you're not the only one. The Oakville Science Foundation has decided recently to begin studying this strange phenomenon. When the results came in, scientists were flabbergasted. "It's the oddest thing." Spokesperson Cynthia Larths says. It appears that the species seen smelling the flowers all share 32.98% of the same DNA! Contrary to what scientists previously thought, most animals are part of the same family! Click Here for more information on this unusual discovery.

Felicity

9/24/2016 01:51:02 pm

Breaking news, Scientists have just discovered that animals have been catching deceases from smelling flowers. I'm Felicity doe and your watching CBC. Welcome back everyone. Know today we have a scientist in to tell us about how animals are get sick and love smelling the flowers. SO anything to say Mr.OMG. Yes we have found that their is something inside of the pollen that is causing the animals to smell and then it makes them sick. We haven't found info evidence that will allow us to run a an test . We think that it is a micromin which is in the pollen that causes them to get really sick. The sickness is called ....... Find out tomorrow on CBC new I'm Felicity Doe and have a good night everybody.

Henry sun

9/24/2016 05:32:39 pm

Why do animals like flowers?In the animal kingdom, there are also many animals like flower , but scientists are still not lifted is this why?One thing is certain,flowers can make animals happy.

Daniel

9/25/2016 07:27:20 am

Animals Tasting The Sense Of Flowers!

Recently, scientists were researching about animals, and they found one thing, 51.67 percent of animals are now tasting the sense of flowers. The scientists found this results when they performed a DNA test. "Well, how did the results come?" Someone asked. The scientists brought the animals to the lab, they scanned them and they found one weird thing inside their animals system. In the picture, you can see all different types of animals smelling flowers. Scientists say that " This could might be a condition or animals evolution." But no one knows the truth to that answer. My prediction is that is a rare condition which can impact animal's life. "Why do you think this way?" Random dude asked. Well there is many types of living nature species or creatures. There is also poison biodiversity. We've all met different types of nature but there is a more particular chance that the animals would get sick. However there is not a lot of information that researchers found, but they would share the results to the national government. Most likely in a few months, the government will be starting a poll based on this phenomenon. Well, thanks to the O.S.S (Oakville Specific Scientists) for sharing this information and taking a screenshot of those pictures. By the way I got one question, have you ever sniffed the flowers and tasted the sense of flowers? Tell me how did you like it?

Daniel

9/25/2016 01:18:12 pm

Where I wrote "But there is more particular chance", I men't *So there is more particular chance*.

Hudson

9/25/2016 08:46:11 am

Have you lately seen the phenomenon. Animals smelling flowers! Scientist are trying to figure out this phenomenon. Scientist John Brad says" This phenomenon is actually a disease!". Police are coming and taking flowers to make sure yours or others animals don't getting this disease. Flower seller Talia pots sighs "My business is ruined!" Flowers are now temporarily banned from Canada, USA and Mexico. So far we heard Asia has banned them to. But still we have heard nothing from Europe, Africa and Australia. Scientists are looking for answers at this very moment. The scientists are collecting pollen from flowers to analyze it. Scientists have told us that the disease make animals addicted to smelling flowers. Also scientists have told us the disease is called Semaflower. This diseases will harm any animal other than us. Stay tuned for more breaking news!

Megan

9/25/2016 10:16:59 am

Sweet smelling flowers
Breaking news Scientists have discovered that there are special flowers such as lilies, lotuses, marigolds and, marjoram. The flowers release a smell that the animals like for animals that are hunted by man and other animals. It some hunters like the smell to but the effect isn’t as bad. This makes it very hard for the animals to run from the hunters in some cases the animals are not able to move. Scientists are still trying to find out why this is happening but so far there is nothing. Keep watching to find out what is happening and what we can do.

Ava

9/25/2016 12:06:25 pm

Animals tasting the sweet smell of flowers!

Breaking news! Scientists have discover that animals are smelling flowers! This is really bad news because that is a disease to them. Scientist are trying to find a way to get rid of them smelling flowers but, it seems like is impossible! one way it is really bad is that hunters and hunt them easier because there stoping to smell flowers. This needs to be stopped! Scientists are still trying to find out, but so far they have nothing, one reason they think is because animals might eat them as food. Stay tuned for more of way this is happening. See you next time!

Ava

9/25/2016 12:10:05 pm

I made a few mistakes when I was writing.

Nathan

9/25/2016 01:42:41 pm

ANIMALS WITH A RARE DISEASE SMELLING FLOWERS

On August 29, 2016, scientists made a discovery, animals with a disease called Numbperco Syndrome (num-pear-co) have been smelling flowers. Scientists world-wide are investigating this. All we know at this point is that these animals are developing human DNA causing them to act up. "How could they get numbperco?" Olivia Walls, the CEO of the National Confederation of Wildlife said. That's exactly what we want to know. More news on this story as it develops.

Brian

9/25/2016 04:02:31 pm

Animals have taken to smelling flowers this is a rare disease called Snificus Flowerofus. "This disease is like from another world" says multiple news station around Canada. "If this disease is possible what else can mother nature introduce to us" ask Canadians all over Canada. Scientists all around the world have been investigating this interesting but yet scary disease. Human DNA might have somehow transferred into animals around the world. How you ask, well scientists are still figuring this out. Animals are mostly attracted to a new type of flower called Animals Love Me. A wonder animals are sniffing these flowers. Until next time on R.O.P.S news.

Josh

9/26/2016 12:43:14 pm

As the animals smell the flowers, the last smell of earth the scientists say. But what better to get a last taste of earth than smelling a flower. A beutiful flower sits there. What happens is we all ignore it. We also ignore the fact that plants give off oxygen. That is why our world is going to destruction. All the pollution...new devices. It's not the same as before. Plants can't keep up anymore, they can't produce oxygen with all the living madness behind our world. Our social lives. Biodiversity is dead. They say, it's causing world destruction. That's simply why they are smelling the flowers. Getting their last taste of earth. The innocent ones, the land users, the ones who never did anything for this to happen.

OF COURSE THIS IS JUST A SILLY STORY AND 100%FAKE.

Emran

9/26/2016 01:03:18 pm

As you have noticed a strange phenomenon has happened at the local zoo, this warm and sunny day. Scientists have been researching and have two different hypothesis's one that is simple that they might have all discovered that they can drink nectar and scientists are still trying to prove that theory or as scientists call it a hypothesis an two that a new deasies called expermina atotos or in short form e.a, that scientist Dan Markedose named it. It is made up of bacterie that is very rare. Luckily, humans can't get effected.We will see you later for more updates. And now the weather.....

56 miniutes later...
We have more news. The effect is a disease, that all animals can get. Thankfully they also have a cure, only if your pet isn't infected, bring the pet to the vet and wrap them in a blanket. Ask the veterinarian for a E.A shot. The scientists are looking for a cure to 1. stop it from spreading 2. to find a cure for the ones already been infected . So see you tomorrow folks

T P

9/26/2016 01:24:45 pm

DISEASE CAUSING ANIMAL ADDICTION TO FLOWERS

You might have noticed that some animals are smelling flowers like crazy! This is because of a small virus called phlowerfower causing an addiction to pollen in the flowers. scientists are not sure how these animals got this virus but they are now testing on some animals. We have some breaking NEWS on this subject, the virus has now infected PEOPLE! one man broke into Terra at night and smelled the flowers in there green house...says they smelled like apple pie and a bit of chocolate and says he ate a flower and that it tasted like lemon mirange pie were not too sure of that last one because after that he died at a hospital because of the poisin in that flower he ate.

Jacqueline

9/27/2016 01:31:04 pm

Everyone likes flowers, even for animals. Did you attract by these crazy pictures? Yes, animals like to smell flowers. They enjoy the smell of different flowers. But, do you know how scientists explain this strange things? Here are more informations for this research by scientists.

Ameer

9/27/2016 03:04:19 pm

Hello every body and welcome to weird things news. Today we will be talking about animals but not just animals, animals that smell flowers. I don't know why animals like flowers so much but scientists have proven that the pollen from flowers attract different types of animals like birds, cats, dogs, rabbits and even monkeys and tigers.Animals like flowers so much every week they smell over 100 flowers that's crazy! Well that's it folks hope you have enjoyed this fascinating discovery hope you tune in next week on weird things news.

alex

9/28/2016 01:34:48 pm

ANIMAL DISEASE:i don't think you've heard the news but a strange string of event has happened in the world of animals.animals love flowers.after testing the animals.scientist figured out what is causing this plant addiction.the diesease is called overprocket.which if you have a pet make sure it does 2 push ups a day for 2 and a half years.

Evan

9/28/2016 05:03:04 pm

Scavenger hunt
Hello today in the News we will be talking about a world wide scavenger hunt. The animals are going crazy! They want to win against those humans in the Annual where’s Waldo hunt. It is the 4.543 billion anniversary this year so if you win you get the trophy of course plus you get to be the president. 3, 2, 1,... The where's Waldo Hunt is on. You could smell the foul animal poop and all the beautiful fresh air as the human's ran out. The beautiful lavender Breeze coming against them. Their looking everywhere, They're looking all around with a beautiful sky and bright rainbows. The animals can see beautiful plants with the Lush green grass riding up their paws. Now the animals are speeding Like a fiery hot Torpedo with the air boinging off all of them except for the snails, slugs and the worms. Hopefully the flower strategy works for the animals.
See you next time on the news.

Rumaysa

9/28/2016 06:32:40 pm

BREAKING NEWS! ANIMALS ADDICTED TO SMELLING FLOWERS!!!

Hello, and this is Rumaysa Shah from TAN (the animal news), and today we have seen a rare species in all animals emerge from its thousand year hibernation. The animals are called flownimals, or flowniwolves, flownilions, depending on whitch animal it is.They all are addicted to smelling flowers, and many have been spotted doing so. Here, we have Doctor Who, who will give us the insight on these animals. "Thank you rumaysa. as you walk down the dusty, gravelly road by river oaks public school, you may see some unusual animals lounging around. This may include dogs, cats, pterodactyls, wolves, lions, tigers, ducks and many more." Thanks to the research facility, we now have an answer to these animals strange genetic codes, and addictions to flowers. Radioactive waves from the science lab nearby accidentally re-activated the genetic code in these preserved animals DNA, and forced them to resurface from their underground 'tombs'. More on this news story, after the commercial break.

Yara

9/29/2016 12:58:23 pm

Sniff, Sniff...I smell something nice!
Well, you would expect humans to smell flowers but animals????
That is what people are noticing these days. People have been reporting that their pets are drawn to flowers, and are actually smelling them. This behaviour has been also reported by zoo keepers, who have noticed that animals are smelling flowers.
What could be the possible reason?
To answer this, we talked to a scientist investigating this story. Although, she is still trying to figure out what would be the possible reason, she suggested that maybe animals are becoming highly sensitive to smells, particularly to natural smells such as flowers.
However, It is too early to determine the reason, so scientists have lots of work to do.

Juliana

9/29/2016 01:22:17 pm

Animals smelling flowers? How strange! Recently animals have been smelling flowers and it's just so weird! Animals love to smell flowers? Your probobly wondering why animals love smelling flowers. Well I went out and talked to a scientist about this and there really isn't a lot of detail yet but scientists are hoping to find something soon. So that's all we know except for that they think maybe it's beacuse they are so sensitive to smells and they think the flowers smell so nice!

Linx

9/29/2016 01:45:49 pm

BREAKING NEWS!!!

Have you noticed that animals are starting to smell flowers? Have you been taking your dog out for a walk but you can't because they won't stop smelling they're smelling a flower? Scientists have figured it out! The explanation is very simple. Read on to see why.

Thomas C.

9/29/2016 02:34:20 pm

Humans has now been obsessed with smelling bright flowers, it seems like the trees aren't getting enough attention. A couple weeks ago we had a article about how animals and pets were obsessed to smelling flowers, dogs liked purple flowers, cats liked yellow flowers, and now humans only likes the flowers if they are brighter than their own futures. Of course, now that people have the new google nose they could smell anything from many mile away. Even though more than half the 25 billion people population some are still normal, it seems like the only ones normal is the ones that haven't purchased the google nose....

Thomas C

9/29/2016 02:38:29 pm

Even though more than half of the 25 billion worldwide population, some are still normal.********************************

Connnor

9/29/2016 02:38:50 pm

(Report Music Starts)Connor: This is Animals News reports when animals do crazy things with me Connor and Dom beside me today we will be talking about some pictures of animals smelling flowers and enjoying the breeze when they Breath in, Then breath out, us Animals News reports we think the first picture in the best picture when there are 2 monkeys smelling a flower together isn't that right Dom? Dom: Yes, yes that's true. Connor: There are some more pictures here but still tuned in to hear some more information right after the ad with Animal News reports. (Report Music Ends)

Feroz

9/29/2016 06:21:41 pm

Animals have been smelling flowers for the last 3 months scientist have still not figured out what is going on . Until one person saw what was going on the flowers weren't just there because that it smelt good it was there because this gave the animals the joy to be happy. Now animals have recently not killing each other for so long.

Layli

10/1/2016 06:34:58 am

MANY ANIMALS ON A ISLAND HAVE BEEN CAUGHT WITH RARE DISEASE!

Recently an airplane crash landed on a small island in the middle on know were. If you want to know how we know it is because apparently there is free WiFi surrounding the island. There were scientists Adam Williams and Johnny Martin aboard this plane that crashed, the scientist say the it is like the island is magical and it is covered in crazy animals. The animals don't sleep all they do is smell the beautiful scent of the flowers. The scientists are to believe that the water surrounding the island is poisonous. The water is that the animals are drinking is what diseases the animals. The scientist found out the water was poisonous because a crewman from the plane drank some and is now acting like the animals. Please help these people we are giving out free airplanes if you would like to search for theses people. See you next time on the news!

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