Halloween Haunts & Descriptive Writing!

10/27/2016

Can you use descriptive writing to describe the SCARIEST costume you have ever seen, heard of or can think of?

If you would rather, you could also describe someone’s point of view as they walk through a TERRIFYING haunted house.

Use as many powerful adjectives as you can. Let's see if we can use our writing to have an effect on each other's emotions!

MWAH-AH-AH-AH

Haya

10/28/2016 05:08:16 am

The most scarcest costume I ever seen is a zombie with blood dripping and can't stop. I have been in a haunted house it is so creepy I was crying have a great Halloween give me some treat

Kate

10/29/2016 05:59:51 am

I waited in line anxiously for my turn. I heard bloodcurdling screams of terror and my stomach flipped over and tied itself into knots. The attendant lowered the red line marker and ushered me into the waiting room. No backing out now. I sat down in a sour smelling corner to wait. I felt something squishy underneath me and I leapt up in surprise. I gagged at the large brain where I had sat. I felt something grab my shoulders. I shrieked and spun around to face the zombie, it's grotesque face painted in blood. It bared it's teeth at me and I screamed again as I bolted down the hallway and into the next room. I sank down the wall, panting. I ran a hand through my messy brown hair. "Hi." A haunting voice said. I looked up in surprise. A little girl looked back at me. Her blonde hair was a tangled mess and her white nightgown was wrinkled and dirty. Her eyes looked like black bottomless pits. She stalked toward me and I was rooted to the spot in terror. I finally got it through my head that she couldn't hurt, after all, this was only an amusement park attraction. I gulped and ran past the girl. I dodged clowns and ghouls, goblins and ghosts. The shredded paintings seemed to watch me as I fled in absolute terror. I ran and ran until, with a witch hot on my tail, I came across a door. I flung it open. The attendant waited there for me "Congratulations. You made it out alive. But will your luck hold?" He gestured and dark, lined hand at a second house. No one told me there was a second house...

Kate (Fixer)

10/29/2016 06:03:21 am

At the end and = a

Kate (Double Fixer)

10/29/2016 01:15:54 pm

"She couldn't hurt" = "she couldn't hurt me.

Sorry for all the mistakes.

Daniel <=======)====0

10/29/2016 10:34:47 am

Last year was a terrifying Halloween, with people walking in their frivolous costumes. We've heard that People were concerned about clowns and it's on everywhere. There was rain drops, dripping from the clouds, when you started to realize, everything was soaked. Most certainly, finding a costume is very hard to get. It's not something like you walk to Walmart and "hey! I think that will be a perfect costume." Basically, the majority of people had made all their decisions / plans on Halloween. Now, the question is: What was the scariest costume I ever saw? Well, it is very hard to choose because some of them isn't that scary. Halloween doesn't needs to be scary right? You can answer that question later. I mean, Halloween is something like you knock someone's door and they give you candy. The scariest costume I ever saw was the clown costume. He was a very big clown, as most body builders. He also had a chainsaw - (Fake chain- saw.) The costume seemed like he was been to a circus, playing deadly tricks. It had bright polka dot colors with evil colors such as red and black. It had blood with bones on his torso. As in the dark night, the colors will stand out. When he enters into the haunted house, you can hear doors screeching, bats flying from nowhere, windows shaking back and forwards, basically it was super horrifying. He was that type of clown who would stalk people and death tricking them. As people walked by, the clown looked like he was smashing the skeleton with a shovel. People screamed to their death and he was running towards to him. This is why never ever enter in the haunted house if there is a clown in there. The wind was blowing out the bats which they flew to another place. It started from clowns being goofs. It then got progressed so pretty much everything related to it got way too far. It was the scariest costume I ever saw. Mostly, what you need to be concerned about is people. Remember: Bad people will turn you into a bad person and good people will turn you into a good person. Halloween is actually one of the best event for people. Fun is the key to good days. I hope you enjoy your Halloween and what costume you will be wearing? By the way, Mu-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha!

Daniel

10/30/2016 07:39:54 am

Just to say that I decided to make it less descriptive. At least, I hope you do like it.

Daniel (x2)

10/30/2016 06:04:18 pm

Also, have a very safe Halloween. Remember: Never leave your house without your parents or guardians.

Daniel (x3)

11/1/2016 04:41:15 pm

I can make a full version of this descriptive writing if I want.

Emran

10/29/2016 07:23:08 pm

As I walked into the dark room, a bloodcurdling shriek came from in front of me. As I stepped in a low moan of a dark wood flooring echoed into my ears. My stomach twisted and turned as a glowing figure appeared in front of me. I ran for my life as I drifted right through the figure. I pushed through the wooden door, and a squeak of the metal door hinges startled me. I ran until I was confronted by a witch........... MWAH-AH-AH-AH! Luckily there was another hallway. As I ran, footsteps echoed behind me. Suddenly a new sound drew my attention. It sounded like a bigger sound like the footsteps, Suddenly it hit me. IT WAS MY HEART! As I ran toward another door, I thought up a plan. I slipped through the door and held the door open for the witch as she neared me, she let out another MWAH-AH-AH-AH! Soon what felt like a feet I slammed the door into her face. OUCH! She was knocked out crazy. I catched my breath, and an aroma of grass entered my nostrils. I was near! I ran out and I saw the street. I left for home, and decided I AM NOT GOING TO DO THAT AGAIN!

Emran Fix

10/29/2016 07:24:31 pm

and decided, I AM NOT GOING TO DO THAT AGAIN! I forgot the coma.

Henry

10/30/2016 10:47:49 am

I walk into a room. I found someone touched me. I looked back to see a the whole body is blood man walk to me. I quickly ran away. But he is chasing me. Finally I get rid of him.

Nathan

10/30/2016 12:41:56 pm

I slowly peer into the perpetual hallway that was stretched out before of me. I felt my stomach tie itself into pretzels every time another aghast shriek came out form the blood stained tunnel. They coxwained me inside and I felt liquidated. In the corner, I saw a phlebotomizing man that was pushing me away like he wanted me to stay away. The hairs an the back of my neck stood up and I looked behind me to see a bloodcurdling man. I backed away disremembering that it was fake. I tried to stay as hidden as possible and I got to the end. I sighed and walked out quickly. That night there was a knock at our door. I saw a man approach me and that's all I can remember.

Josh

10/30/2016 02:19:54 pm

As Jimmy was walking through the garden of the most scary decorations in town, he began to notice. He began to notice that the most scary decoration in the garden actually just moved right in front of his own eyes. Nothing those cold glass eyes could tell a lie about. He knew his mind wasn't trying to trick him. And all of a sudden, it moved again! He couldn't believe what was happening! He was just hopelessly praying for the thought of his eyes where just in need for a checkup, but there was no escaping this one. He knew that it was hopeless for a nice thought to come across his head. And then again, the decoration moved! It started to move its legs toward Jimmy! The black eyed, bloody monster started to approach him. With blood dripping down all of his body He never thought that his death would be caused by a unicorns bloody head, and a red robe that said "Underworld, is where you belong!". But he still wasn't ready to face the fact that he was going to die. As the figure came ten steps closer every blink. The ghoul was right before his eyes. It reached out with it's skeleton arm, starting to drip blood on Jimmy's werewolf costume. And as the figure took of the unicorn helm, Jimmy realized this was no decoration. It was the grim reaper. It pulled its scythe from behind his back. And was clearly ready, to give Jimmy the tap. The tap of death. Jimmy though. He had never believed in the grim reaper. And he still tried to hold on to the fact of he doesn't. But it was impossible. This doesn't look like how I expected, Jimmy thought. The grim reaper was a skeleton face, and as he noticed it, the skull started to pour a pool of blood from its skull. He reached out to Jimmy. Stared him in the eye, with the biggest Black eyes he had ever seen. But from inside the eyes. He could see his own grave. And from inside the eye he could see fire. The devil. But a lot more blood than he had expected. The grim reaper reached even further, further, and...then that was the last thing Jimmy experienced. Fear. Death. If you don't believe in the grim reaper, then you shall suggest now that you might. Because if you don't it will be that one sudden night, where the last experience of your life. Is fright.

TRUE STORY...
TOLD BY GRIM REAPER
WRITTEN BY JOSH... Remember kids, when you trick or treat tonight. Be careful of what you believe in, or the date of your death, is that night. HAPPY HALLOWEEN

Josh's Haunting Comments

10/30/2016 02:24:16 pm

"HAPPY HALLOWEEN, AND DON'T FORGET YOUR LIGHT!"
"OR ELSE DARKNESS, IS NOT YOU"RE ONLY FRIGHT"

Grammar police.

10/30/2016 02:27:42 pm

"Jimmy though"
"Jimmy thought"

Rumaysa

10/30/2016 04:15:49 pm

darkness.

it threatened to swallow you, as you walked through the house.

abandoned, that's what the house was. the mayor, he foolishly turned it into a haunted house. little did you know, it was much more. MUCH. much more.

you walked through the doors, and shuddered. it was cold. very. very cold. you try to keep your mind off of the groaning floor-boards, sweat staining your (insert what your costume is here) costume. you see the first door, and force your feet to walk towards it. there was always. something scary behind the halls, in the shadows. you hear some thuds echoing above you, but shrug it off. probably some kids who made it there before you. you shudder, and shriek as the first actor gives you a scare. they were dressed up as a ghost, with glow in the dark paint on the sheets. "hey (your name here), are ya chicken?" your friend asks you, as they trail behind you. "not at all!" you say nervously. you look back, and hear your friend shriek. you look back, and see nothing. "hey! (your friend's name here) a-are you trying to trick me?" minutes pass, and all you can hear is the wind howling outside. you shrug and think ;hey, they'll turn up EVENTUALLY! right?; you walk through the halls, looking at the scary scenes, like people reenacting Frankenstein, or Dracula. you reach the second floor. you read the sign hanging by the walls. "walk through the halls, if you dare. will you survive?" you shudder, and walk further. you feel something crawling down your neck, before realising it's just your hair. suddenly, you hear echoing shrieks, and feel someone.. or SOMETHING tap your shoulder. you gulp, and turn around. you cannot describe what you saw. it was someone- no, something. a man, tall and faceless. your thoughts are blank, until you remember something. only one thing is in your mind at this moment. ;RUN.; you sprint down the halls, the man running after you, and effortlessly gaining on you. you stop. a dead end. you moan, as the man calmly walks towards you. he corners you, until you are a sweaty mess, hunched in a corner. the man leans in, and you only have one thought. ;i am about to die. this man will kill me, and no-one will know.; he leans closer, and pulls a knife out of his sleeves. the last thing you remember doing, is screaming, trying to let the horror, and sheer disbelief out of your body. the last thing you see, is the man's plain, white face. and sinister, black grin. before silence. the man grins, and picks up your body. he walks calmly, downstairs, into the basement, and opens a trapdoor. he tosses your cold body in, the last expression on your glassy eyed face a look of sheer horror, into the room. you land with a thud, amongst hundreds of other bodies.

(well, i hope this is scary enough for ya'll.)

Rumaysa

10/30/2016 04:37:17 pm

I can give you complete detail of how you die if you want.

Rumaysa

10/30/2016 04:37:51 pm

*how you die in the story

evan

10/31/2016 10:38:53 am

please say it

Ava

11/1/2016 12:31:28 pm

As I walk closer to the scary wooden doors, I started to have second thoughts on this one. There it was, the scariest halloween haughted house ever. I just stood there thinking about what to do. Then A lady popes out of nowhere and told me to come in. " come in darling it is not scary, you will only die". I started to move back but, she pushed me in. I guess I have to do this I said, so I started walking and I voice started taking. Hello, welcome to the haughted house where no one has made it out alive, keep walking and no turning back, remember I am watching you. I kept walking and walking till I came to a dead end. Then out of know where a freaky looking zombie came out if know where and started chasing me. The only thing I thought in my head was to run, so I started running the other way. The zombie was gaining on me. I had to run faster I thought. But, the lady poped out of know where again and I remembered her warning, but there was more things to think about. I WAS TRAPED! THEY HAD ME CORNING! I was about to yell again but, then I felt something below me, like a trap door so I quickly got down, and started feeling for a trap door and I found one! I got in it, and saw a long hallway. The first thing I thought was to run down the hall, and I did it. I looked back, and saw the lady and the zombie quickly following me and gaining on me. They were a lot fasting them me. I kept walking and finally saw a dim light. I was a way OUT! I started running even faster then before. The lady and the zombie were only like a metre away! Finally The light got bigger and got out of there. The zombie and the lady stoped running after me and I saw another lay and she said. " Good job, you made it out alive".
I was huffing and puffing like crazy because I was running so fast. I started to head home, and I knew I was NEVER GOING TO DO THAT AGAIN!

Tomas (didnt meen to do that!!)

11/1/2016 12:48:35 pm

The scariest costume I've ever seen was a reaper slash ghost thing with a scythe and it looked really cool with it's fake blood on, Anyway I think this is the scariest costume ever because I had a nightmare about it the night before!

Tomas

11/1/2016 12:44:46 pm

Helloooooooo!! everybody! 1st. how much candy did everyone get?
2nd. The scariest costume I've ever seen was a

Ava fixer

11/1/2016 12:50:02 pm

1. I was traped they had me Corning= I was traped they had me cornered.

2. The zombie and the lady stoped running after me and I saw another lay and she said.... = the zombie and the lady stoped running after me and I saw another lady and she said.....

3. As I walk closer to the scary wooden doors= As I walked closer to the scary wooden doors

Brian

11/1/2016 03:18:16 pm

"Halloween is one day away" thought Bob as he walked into a store for masks and Halloween costume, he could hear the squeals of excitement as kids where buying there costumes there where a lot of people I thought I wonder where the masks section is. After countless minuets he finally found the a masks on multiple hangers around the small extra room. He was all alone when he heard a faint whisper coming from one of the masks. He stalked with shaky legs over to the mask looking around for any evidence of the voice. He picked the mask off the hanger and studied it closely and carefully for any sighs of a speaker or batteries on the strange mask. He heard it again saying "Tonight you will experience history before your night is over you will..." He waited for the rest of the sentence to form from the mask. He cautiously brought it close to his face and went to put it on when he brought it close to his face black vapor poured out of the mask into the room shutting the door trapping Bob Inside. The vapor was burning his eyes out of his sockets as he screamed with pain. He tried to take the off as the mask latched onto his face. Turning were ever he touched him self he turned to what felt like wood. No metal, the mask was slowly turning him into metal he could feel his organs beeing crushed bleeding o inside. He tried to move his arms but it felt as if they were frozen with ice. He tried to scream for help but all that emerged was a low mumble. Then all the black vapor seemed to catch fire burning his already crushed organs. For what felt like hours Bob lay on the floor wondering if anyone would see him in the charred ruins of the building. He tried to move, Jerking his arms in legs in odd ways. He finally got his feet under him and pushed himself up to look at the area. The town was in ruins, people jerking violently on the floor. "No" he thought "This could not have happened so fast not in a decade". He started moving through the crushed bodies that littered the street. All of a sudden a body barreled into him from behind knocking him into the hard pavement of the road. He felt no pain, he reached up to his face and touched there and still felt the mask. He turned to face his attacker. No, attackers. He recognized the mask from the shop he had been in before turning into metal. He noticed all of them had holes as big as endless pits seeming to swallow everything. He wondered why he could not see them at the shop. Then the truth hit him like a bullet, this mask had made him see the body's behind the mask. He reached to his eyes thinking what would happen if he had black eyes. He felt around his face for his eyes even covering his vision of where his eyes should be. He came back to that spot and pushed into his eyes shoving his hand into his black pit eyes. He sighed with disappointment. As he began to take them out, Vapor seemed to steam of his arms and every where else. Evaporating his body cloaks seeming to come out of his neck. The words of the mask came back to him "Tonight you will experience history before your night is over you will" Now he knew whet she meant. "You will become the Grim Reaper" This very day I stalk innocent children dragging them under the bed for my collection if you every look under you bed and see a trapdoor and you hear screams open to see all of my body's that I collect. Sweet Dreams.

Connor

11/1/2016 07:16:52 pm

Once upon a time their was a boy named Connor. He was excited for the upcoming Halloween day. When it was time to go out for candy Connor went to a house people are saying it's scary but Connor said “I’m not scared of anything” but when he went to go check it out he walked in with REAL SPIDERS crawling around me snakes, spider webs, blood and skeletons but he didn't even know any of the decoration were even real but he waked in and spiders were on me skeletons jump scaring me but last of all BLOOD, he felt gooey stuff but some got in my mouth he tasted it and I knew it was real blood that when he saw no one was behind me or even near me but spiders crawling up me and skeletons that were falling down braking themselves to pieces then… all you could hear was AAAAAAAAHHHH when you saw me running out of the house going home and hiding for the rest of the halloween day.

Megan

11/2/2016 01:24:34 pm

THE PRISONER'S POINT OF VIEW
I herd the door bell ringing I had tied I string to the handle earlier so it looked like the house was old and wasn't locked. the two kids came in it looked like this would be an easy job. But I swooped down and kicked the door shut so it was clear that you had to walk through the house. The thing is no one ever walks out. I had over prepared and made it so no one could escape not even my self. one kid almost saw me almost in this operation there was no room for error. It had been five days after I had broken out of jail and I was planing some revenge on all who entered this house. It was Halloween it looked like I would get some candy to and another blood stain on my knife. The only weapon I ever used.

THE TWO KIDS POINT OF VIEW
Me and my friend came her for candy not for a look in a haunted house but it was to late to turn back. I wanted to run but looking at the stuff in house wasn't good the decorations they weren't decorations it was real. Blood and bones I realised that I could smell rotting flesh. I took a step side ways to run for the door but I stepped on to something soft. I looked down a heart that was warm I looked at my friend she was gone a hole in the floor to replacing her. I looked down and gasped I felt a pain in my arm following by gashing blood.

THE PRISONER'S POINT OF VIEW
One dead one to go! This was easy the cut in the kids arm was deep so she would lose the arm in seconds but when have I ever stop there. never.

Megan

11/2/2016 01:27:38 pm

If you want the all of it click the link!https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I1N1fLqgqyW-_WaY61zzTmW3Q7-EC33_fypgAroNPo8/edit

megan

11/2/2016 01:29:43 pm

sorry I the link didn't work

Juliana

11/2/2016 01:49:11 pm

As i Walked into a dark room with creepy skeletons and ghosts and stuff, i heard a loud boom. I looked behind me and saw nothing but when i looked up i saw bats and flying ghosts and stuff, now i dont know if i told you this but there was a guide telling me what to do , i didnt know if i should believe there was actually real things and the guide was tellung me to calm down but then zombies started chasing me and creepy ladys started calling my name. Then i saw my mom and i reached for her hand and i actually got it. But then i realized i was looking at my mom in my room and it was just a dream. You have been sleeping for so long! Wake up wake up!!!

Lin Xin

11/2/2016 02:07:58 pm

"Are you sure?" I asked. My friend Garry suggested that we go to the haunted house. So, we got into the line. But now, I was having second thoughts. The house looked really scary. It looked like a regular house but, it was draped in cobwebs. Every so often, it let out a squeak. The trees around it were blacked, as if burned. The screams were really loud. No haunted house that I have ever went to got that many screams. "Well yeah," said Gary. "I mean are you scared?" "No! Of course not!" I said even though I really was. "It's just an attraction and it's not real." Even though I repeated that to myself that around, let's say, 100 times, I still didn't believe myself. "So," I said to the red-haired girl in front of me. "What do you think?" "I'm excited," she said. "I love scary things." The girl went in the haunted house. I heard her scream a lot. When she came out, her eyes were unfocused. Maybe she was just thinking of what the house was about. Not that something actually happened to her. Garry and I went in the house. "Here goes nothing," I mumbled to myself. The inside was dark, but not too dark. I could still see things. I walked for sometime. Nothing happened. I started to wonder why the other people were screaming so much. I felt something whoosh behind me. "Garry?" I said. No answer. "Garry?" Still no reply. "Garry, please don't make this a joke." No answer. I was getting worried now. What happened to Garry? My foot touched something. I jumped. I looked down. It was the red-haired girl that was in front of me in the line. I took a step back. Suddenly, a blast of heat blasted me. I turned around. It was a DRAGON! I screamed. This was no ordinary haunted house. I ran and ran. I have to get out of this place, I thought. Suddenly, a witch appeared out of nowhere! I froze. "It is time for you to die!" she cackled. The witch conjured a ball of light from nowhere. She threw it. I unfroze in time to dodge it. I ran. I didn't look back. "Come back here!" I heard the witch shriek with rage.I hit something. "OOF," I said. I screamed. IT WAS A ZOMBIE!!. Could this get any worse? I knew this was a bad idea! I ran and ran and ran until I saw light. "Yes!" I cried. I ran for the light. It was a door! I ran out. I saw a circle of ghosts. "Oh no," I said. I ghosts drew closer and closer until they were touching me. My body felt colder and colder. And colder. Then, it started to hurt. That was my last thought. Then, I died. Suddenly, I was back. The ghosts that killed me were surrounding me. I would kill all the other people that came out of the haunted house like they killed me.

Lin Xin (My first 1 wasn't good)

11/3/2016 01:51:38 pm

"Are you sure?" I asked. My friend Garry suggested that we go to the haunted house. So, we got into the line. But now, I was having second thoughts. The house looked really creepy. It looked like a regular house but, it was draped in cobwebs. Every so often, it let out a squeak. The trees around it were blacked, as if burned. The screams were really loud. No haunted house that I have ever went to got that many screams. "Well yeah," said Gary. "I mean are you scared?" "No! Of course not!" I said even though I really was. "It's just an attraction and it's not real." Even though I repeated that to myself that around, let's say, 100 times, I still didn't believe myself. "So," I said to the red-haired girl in front of me. "What do you think?" "I'm excited," she said. "I love scary things." The girl went in the haunted house. I heard her scream a lot. When she came out, her eyes were unfocused. My imagination started taking. Maybe something took over her body? What if she is a ghost. I shivered at that thought. I shook myself. Those were just stories and they weren't real. Maybe she was just thinking of what the house was about. Not that something actually happened to her. Garry and I went in the house. "Here goes nothing," I mumbled to myself. The inside was dark, but not too dark. I could still see things. I walked for sometime. Nothing happened. I started to wonder why the other people were screaming so much. I felt something whoosh behind me. "Garry?" I said. No answer. "Garry?" Still no reply. "Garry, please don't make this a joke." No answer. I was getting worried now. What happened to Garry? My foot touched something. It was a bit squishy. I looked down. It was the red-haired girl that was in front of me in the line. That wasn't right. She was outside. I took a step back. Suddenly, the house turned warm. I turned around. It was a DRAGON! I screamed. The dragon sent another stream of fire that narrowly missed me. This was no ordinary haunted house. I ran and ran. I have to get out of this place, I thought. Suddenly, a witch appeared out of nowhere! I froze. "It is time for you to die!" she cackled. The cackle sent shivers down my spine. The witch conjured a ball of light out of nowhere. She threw it. I unfroze in time to dodge it. I ran. I didn't dare look back. "Come back here!" I heard the witch shriek with rage.I hit something. "OOF," I said.I looked up. I screamed. IT WAS A ZOMBIE!!. Could this get any worse? I knew this was a bad idea! I ran and ran and ran until I saw light. "Yes!" I cried. I ran for the light. It was a door! I was so happy to get out of this haunted house. I ran out panting. I saw a circle of ghosts. They were transparent. I could see through them. My happiness was drained out and was replaced by fear. "Oh no," I whispered. There was no way out of this. The ghosts floated closer and closer until they were touching me. My body felt colder and colder. And colder. Then, it started to hurt. The pain was all over my body. I screamed in pain. I just wanted to die. That was my last thought. Then, all I saw was darkness. The darkness was gone as soon as it came. The ghosts that killed me were surrounding me. The biggest ghost floated forward. "We won't kill you if you help us kill the other people that come out of the house." I certainly didn't want to die again. I also didn't want to kill other people. "No," I said. "I won't." "Fine," said the ghost. "Very well." The ghost nodded. All the ghosts lit up. The pain came back again. I screamed. The darkness came again. Then, I was back. I understood. My only option was to kill the other people or else the other ghosts would kill me again and again. "Fine," I said. I would kill all the other people that came out of the haunted house like they killed me.

Amy

11/2/2016 04:41:51 pm

Monsters tearing you, lifeless skulls, pale ghosts floating, zombies dripping blood, but that wasn't all. I walked closer to the strange man beyond the crowd. I walked slowly and poked him with my trembled finger. He turned around and I glanced. He was a pale man with many wrinkles, he was hoary. I glanced down and jumped back as if I was shocked by electricity. As I glanced down again, I was breathing hard, the stomach and lungs were all sticking out of his body, dripping blood everywhere. It looked so real and gross. Beyond this, more disgusting things was waiting for me. I walked slowly toward the field, swallowing hard, and within a second, I bumped into a woman and fell with a loud thud, and as I looked up for the second time, I gasped. A bloody woman. I scrambled up from the soaking grass, facing the woman. I wish I hadn't ate that much. This time was more serious. The woman have a baby inside her belly, but not a normal one, but a one with blood all oven its head, crying hard, and there was also blood all over the woman's body, and most of all, the baby was real. My head was spinning fast, how possibly could a real baby be inside a woman's body and his head was outside? The woman walked past me without looking. I started to fright, will there be another person waiting for me? I ran as fast as I could toward the darkness, and within a moment, I saw a flash of light. Maybe I was imagining, maybe this was only a dream, a terrible dream. Before I could move, a woman flashed in front of me. A beautiful woman, with attractive eyes and blood red lips. She muttered something under her breath and something terrible happened. The woman's eye's grew red, her nails grew long and sharp like a tiger's paw, her ears grew sharper, and a huge black wing appeared from her body, it was a goblin. I was breathing hard, this can't be real, it's all a dream, everything will be fine when I wake up, but it could be true, everything can be true, another voice came from my head. I was failed with terror, but before I realized, it was too late. The monster waved her massive wings and stretched her sharp nails and within a second, I felt my throat tighten. I was trying to breath, choking. I was dead. The monster laughed evilly as she again waved her formidable wings and flew into the forest. She glanced around, making sure no one's here, then threw the dead body into the shadow.

Amy fixer

11/2/2016 04:45:34 pm

oven=over

Amy grammar fixer

11/2/2016 04:51:12 pm

-eye's=eyes
-a huge black wing=huge black wings

Jacqueline

11/2/2016 05:49:00 pm

I walked over to the window. There was the house across the street. I could feel it staring at me, the window like great glass eyes that catched my presence and seemed track my every move. As I watched, a wispy ribbon of black smoke rose from the chimney. Just then a cold gust of wind blew sharply toword me, so strongly that I had to close the window.
I shook my head, lowered the blinds, and fell back on my bed. As I slept, my room grew darker and darker as the shadow of my neighborhood's house crept ominously across his floor. Extending itself toward me, the silent shadow also grew larger and larger, suddenly changing into a giant bony hand that seemed ready to pounce. The house has become a living, breathing monster, and people have started to disappear! I suddenly heard someone knocking at the door, I scared then I woke up, I said to myself:" It was a dream!"

Jacqueline fixer

11/2/2016 05:53:29 pm

I suddenly heard = Suddenly I heard

Felicity

11/2/2016 06:02:54 pm

Two boys walked into the dark house, and both looked at each other with regret. They looked up to only see a room full of spider webs. They could only see the dust of the old rickety wood floor as it crumpled beneath their feet. The two boys do not know each other and so they introduced themselves to each other. The first boy's name was Joseph, and the second boys name was Timmy. As the boys introduced their names they heard a big “THUMP!” Joseph and Timmy jumped back from their first step and tried to exit, but the door did not budge. They tried to turn the door handle, but it did not move. Turning away from the door, Joseph and Timmy saw a light down the hallway and moved towards it. As they approached the room they heard a “Hi!” and jumped in fear only to see a girl standing in the room. The girl was wearing army pants and a ripped up old tank top. Joseph and Timmy said “Nice costume”. The girl replied in a confused way “What do you mean costume?” Joseph said quietly “YOU'RE A GHOST!” Joseph and Timmy were ready to run, but the girl interrupted the two. “I am not a ghost I am a girl and there's something here trying to kill us!” Timmy said “No way this is just a haunted house.” “NO” the girl said. When Joseph started laughing the girl took her arm and slapped it across his face. The girl replied saying “Did the feel like a ghost to you.” Joseph said “No”. Timmy interrupted “Joseph we don’t know her name” “You are right” replied Joseph. “ We can’t trust you if we don’t know your name” . The girl responded “I am sorry I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Jamie, Jamie The Archer.” The boys started to laugh at her last name. Jamie was readying her foot to kick the two. The boys noticed and stopped in a split of a second.

They all heard a bigger THUMP! The boys jumped with fear and hid under a table as the girl grabbed a pipeline and pulled herself up. The boys’ faces were just amazed at the girl's upper body strength. They all looked at the stairs to see a figure in a dark cloak and a hint of red on the top part of his cloak. He entered the room Jamie, Joseph, and Timmy were hiding in. The strange looking man picked a book up from the book case and it’s title was “Top Ten Ways To Suck Blood”. The girl was the only one that noticed the book title as the boy’s were too scared to even tilt their heads just the slightest. As the man picked the book up and left back up the stairs, they heard a big SLAM, as the door shut. Jamie knew that they could come out of their hiding places. The girl then told the boys “We NEED to get out of here.” The boys looked at each other and agreed. “There is a fire escape ladder under the couch over there. We need to get it and open the fourth window in this room. When it is open we put the ladder down and bam we are out.” Joseph asked “why the fourth window?” “Because it is the only one with a latch”, said Jamie. Timmy said “ okay we have the escape route but which couch?” They all looked at a room full of couches and Jamie pointed to the third couch on the right. “That one” Jamie replied. The boys and Jamie rushed to the couch and grabbed the ladder. They opened the window. But what they didn’t realize is that the man was already outside.

THE END
Read Chapter 2 DRACULA
In my next series
Created by Felicity

Jacqueline fixer

11/2/2016 06:21:01 pm

toword = toward

Ameer

11/2/2016 06:44:49 pm

This Halloween, me and my friends went trick-or-treating. We went to one of the houses on the street.There was a man wearing a torn suit with makeup on his face to look like a zombie. There were cuts and burns with blood on his face . His eyes were the most scary because he wore contact lenses, which had small pupils and very minimal colour to them, so it felt like he was staring right into my soul. When all my friends got their candy I was the last one all alone. My legs were trembling, my stomach was falling apart when he took his hand and got candy and dropped it into my sack. Then he jumped, which made me run fast to my friends.

yara

11/3/2016 01:52:34 pm

As I walked through the scary terrifying house, I saw a person dressed in black suit and a white mask holding a knife, and the knife was dripping blood. Then, as I kept walking I saw the scariest thing in my life. It was a horrifying clown holding a racket. As i walked near him, he was looking at me in a creepy way, and then as i walked farther it got darker and darker and I couldn't see a thing so I felt like something was
moving. Then I felt like it was touching me so I started shouting so so loud and I felt like I was going to faint.
After that, I walked and walked and while I was walking I couldn't see a thing. I didn't now were I was going or which way I was going. Then I saw something glowing in the dark that spelled exit. I was so happy becuse I was so scared that I was shaking so bad I couldn't walk .

Do not dare enter the terrifying scary house becuse it is actually horrifying.

evan

11/3/2016 04:47:47 pm

The scariest costume I've ever seen is a Leafs Jersey.They are rivals with my favorite team the Montreal Canadiens. So, I will be talking about the leaf’s scary jersey.You probably don't think it's scary but when they score you are really scared because you're losing to the one of the worst teams in the league. If you like “really we just lost to the worst team in the league.” But even though you're frightened don't worry you'll be over it in no time you're probably going to score against the leafs so don't be scared of their Jersey.

Thomas C.

11/3/2016 05:19:33 pm

“Hey where do you think you’re going?” shouted the security guard as Drew dashed by him to go into the old mental hospital, of course this wasn’t one of his genius idea, it was his friends who dared him to go into the hospital. Drew was a daredevil as people say and he is addicted, he had no idea that there would be a guard, “why will there be a guard” thought Drew as he easily passed the second guard. He started to get tired but still was able to pass the third guard, all the guards chased him until he went inside the building, all of the guards stopped and just started laughing “what’s so funny” he shouted to the guards, all they did was just staring at him as if they were possessed. He turned on his flashlight and started recording for the proof, just as he thought that this was going to be easy he heard noises, these sound definitely did not come from the guards. He walked for a little bit until he saw a dead body, then he saw all of his friends in different rocking chairs possessed. He heard voices saying “you are unwanted here” the voice sounded like a little girl. The age of the girl was 6 or 7 at the most, he then saw scratches against the wall that spelled “TURN AROUND” it looked like it was the blood of his friends, still wet and dripping as if you cut your hand. Drew was really scared even though he has been to places most people would not even think about, he thought about the message that the was scratched into the walls, he thought about it “turn around” kept on popping into his head so he decided to call this quits. Just as Drew was about to open the old door he heard the sound of the lock clicking…

That Guy

11/3/2016 05:57:07 pm

The scariest costume is the dreaded jigsaw costume with scary swirls and a creepey mouth and red and black evil eyes. He has sevarael traps and is not scared to kill. Stay away from jigsaw to survive and when he asks you to play say no.

layli

11/3/2016 06:16:45 pm

Every year Johnny and his friends go trick-or-treating. This year the boys decided to spend their time at a nearby horrifying haunted houses. As the time went by the boys were getting ready to go out. By time it was it was time to go out to the horribly scary haunted house. When the boys got to the haunted house there was a line, but with only a couple people. They were not kids though, adults with scared expressions on their faces. When the boys stepped in line some brave men jumped out of the window horrified like there was actual murderers with absolutely real chainsaws and killer clown and thanks so dark you couldn't imagine in there. Then there was a scream followed with a loud heavy metal door dramatically swinging open the group in front of Johnny and his friends stared at each others then they told Johnny and his friends to go in front of them, as the men walked off the boys turn around and the men weren't there, gone they disappeared. The boys were scared though they said they were never scared of anything, they ran together in a group not knowing where they were going everything went black. They couldn't see a thing the boys came to realize they ran right into the haunted house they heard something coming at them closer and closer. The boys we're so scared AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH screamed one of the boys someone grabbed his neck there was no longer a sound coming out of him another boy try to punch whoever or whatever was choking him he punched but hit the boy being kicked in the head instead knocking him to the ground at least whatever was holding him wasn't there anymore Johnny help his friend up and they walked to where they thought they came in was flat just well they didn't understand just then Johnny realized he had his phone in his pocket he turned it on and then the flashlight on it. they were just and a dull hallway then a boy said no the walls are closing in on us. The boys started running to the end the hallway they could see another hallway that they could turn into the walls got so close they were sprinting their hardest they made it after all! There hearts were pounding so fast they lent on the wall. The wall all of a sudden split so fast the boys fell back into a staircase leading upwards one boy said let's go up there must be a window because those men jumped out of one from the second floor they walked up but there was no light no window to be seen. It went pitch black again Johnny's phone died. The boy started walking they turned a corner something jumped out at them a zombie's the boys switched directions, they turned around to see more zombies, Johnny attacked a zombie and it disintegrated in seconds. Guys, just pull their arms of and then elbow there stomach said Johnny, oh by the way guys I think there is a bit of light down that hall maybe it is a window or door. Okay, said the boys, lets go fast so we can get out of this place. BOOM, BOOM, BOOM, the zombies were all gone. The boys went over to the end where Johnny saw light it was a window but it had thick thick glass, Help johnny as a masked man drag him down the hall the boys chased Johnny trying to get him and make the masked man let. They turned a corner at the end of the hall was a big window wide open with cracked glass it must have been the one those other men jumped out of Johnny thought to himself as he was still being dragged by a masked man. Johnny's friends decided that they would all push the man so they did and all they went out the window. Once they got outside and on the ground a bunch of police drove up to the haunted house and put handcuffs around the guys hand, put him it there car and drove off. That is how jonny's haunted house adventure was! HAVE FUN AT YOUR NEXT HAUNTED HOUSE! BYE BYE!

Feroz!

11/4/2016 06:20:36 am

I went into the room I was holding onto my brother we went to the first room I saw blood slapped onto the wall like an arrow and then out of nowhere A ghost grabbed me I was able to pinch his arm and fight off we ran and all I saw was my mother getting held by the ghost . NOW I was scared the guy took off his mask his face was pale with black hair and he said GREAT KID NOW TIME FOR TASK 2 GO TO TO THE HAUNTED HOUSE AND MAKE IT OUT ALIVE . GREAT now I'm going to do the task 2 more footprints were going in then they were going out

alex

11/4/2016 06:23:16 am

one day 2 kids were fooling around and one told they other.I bet i can survive longer than u.when they finally go in all they see is broken down pictures.they go into the former bedroom of kings and queens that lived here and then they got trapped by a cute but deadly dog.They killed him.but then the grim reaper appeared then the zombies that hadnt noticed them apperared.then they fined out how to kill him realising that he cant die but the grim reaper still chased him into a pool were he put all his victim.then he spoke saying soon you will end up like them.they ran but keep on finding a dead end.soon the lights went out one of them was gone.then the 1 left ran for his life and then got out.to his suprise it was a prank the grim reaper was fake or was he!!!!his friend was hiding from him and he realised the dog the zombies they were real.bye bye see u later is what they said as they went home and forget all about it

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