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Building Character!

2/24/2022

 
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As we’ve been reading Pax over the past few weeks, we have spent some time looking at characters and their individual characteristics and I hope that you’re starting to notice that each character has his/her own story, background, things they like and don’t, and their own personality.  These characters are written that way by the author.  
Today it’s your turn, you get to develop a character that you will use in a few future blog posts. 
For your post this week:

Create your own character that you will use in a story one day. For this character, they must have: 
  • a name
  • a favourite food
  • 3 personality traits (e.g. funny or humble)
  • a flaw (something that can create conflict)
  • how would they react in a difficult situation (e.g. they didn’t do their homework)
Write down all of these things in your post below. When you’ve done that, write a paragraph from their perspective as they start their first day of grade 4. I’m so excited to see the characters that you create!

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Peyton
2/24/2022 06:51:53 pm

My characters name is kai
kai's favourite food is pancakes
kai's 3 personality traits are funny nice and brave
kai's flaw sutter's
if he did not do his homework he would probably get nervous and start to sttuer and then he gets brave talks to his teacher and finish his homework that day.
kai's first day in grade 4
He had pancakes for breakfeast. he was excited to see his old friends and new. he told jokes and he was brave for his first day in grade 4

Damian
2/26/2022 07:15:00 am

my characters name is mr cloud
mr clouds favorite food is walffles
mr clouds charcter traits are nice funny and silly
mr clouds flaw sutters if he did'nt do his home work he would always try to do the next one but still be therey worried
when mr cloud was in grade 4 he woke up in the morning and whent downstairs and had waffles for breakfast he was exited to go to school and play with his friends that well he hoped were in his class and thats how mr clouds first of school in 4th grade went

Dylan
2/27/2022 03:52:17 pm

My characters name is mad dog.
Mad dog's favourite food is hot dogs🌭 from the streets.
Mad dog's character traits are mad🤬. deadly😵, and cuckoo🤯.
Mad dog's flaw is that he get's mad at dogs but he loves hot dogs🌭.
When Mad dog woke for his first day of grade 4 he ate a hot dog for breakfast when he was at school he saw his friends big boy🧑and fat girl👰then he saw a dog out the window then he got mad🤬but he did not freak out because he was at school then he saw his teacher Mr. butterfly then he had a get day.

mason m
2/28/2022 04:23:54 pm

my character s name is Peter🧍
peter s favorite food is cake🍥
Peter s character traits are jolly and reliable
peter s flaw is that he talks too
peter s first day at school he brought cake he was to chatty
no one talked to him for the rest of the day
and he made a friend named jeremy . the end

0wen.ca
3/1/2022 01:32:56 pm

my characters name is bob. bobs favorite food is well he dose not eat food because he play Fortnite 24/7 but he did eat chocolate cake so chocolate cake is favorite food. and he is sooooooooooooooooo funny and nice. bobs flaw, at times he can be tooooo loud for people and bold , like one time he was at school but it was show and tell when it was his turn he was talking way to loud.if you what to know what he looks like here you go https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1Bb9WS6gOMd7Z32ijjkm0ZPEhzGgwMHuXRMXca2Y9gcg/edit

Alex
3/2/2022 01:05:39 pm

my charter is a grim repair i call him grim
grim love's pizza
grim is so nice and funny
grim is a nice grim repair

mason
3/2/2022 01:32:51 pm

the name i hate home work fav food pizza hates homework and school loves video his dad left him when he was a baby and mom died when 5 when he woke up and made some bacon and eggs then he walk to school

Henry
3/2/2022 03:09:29 pm

a name: Axo
a favourite food: Fish
3 personality traits (e.g. funny or humble): funny, silly, lucky
a flaw (something that can create conflict): afraid of math
how would they react in a difficult situation (e.g. they didn’t do their homework): He would say that his plant ate his homework

Today is my first day of Grade 4. As I walked to school, I was thinking of all the new friends I was going to make. When I got to school, a $100 bill flew into my hands! What a great start to Grade 4! I just hope I don't have to do any math this year!!

Emmanuel
3/2/2022 05:13:39 pm

My character name is Jeff
Jeff's favourite food is Burger
Jeff 3 personality traits are

Emmanuel
3/2/2022 05:44:49 pm

My character name is Jeff.
Jeff's favorite food is Burger.
Jeff 3 personality traits are Brave, Honesty and Empathy.
Jeff do not wake up early.
Jeff would be a little nervous and would tell the teacher that he would do it tomorrow.




HITARTH
3/3/2022 02:02:55 pm

my character
my characters name is grey.
greys favorite food is spagetti.
grey has 3 character traits he is funny he is playful he is kind.
but one problem grey submits his homework after the due date

greys first day of grade 4
grey woke up on his first day of grade 4. he went on the bus and when he came to school he said hello to his friends and teacher. At recess someone punched him in the face and he had to go home immediately .Then the next day the guy who punched grey said sorry to him then they were friends forever the end

Arik
3/3/2022 02:26:43 pm

My characters name is Tom Tom
Tom Tom's favourite food is cupcakes🧁 and Donuts🍩
Tom Tom's 3 personality traits He is Kind, Brave, Lucky
Tom Tom is afraid of spider
Tom Tom didn't do his homework because his cat ripped is homework into pieces.

Today is my first day of Grade 4. As I walked to school,I was thinking all that the friends I will make at school, Then a $200 bill flew into my hands! That was lucky I said to myself then a $300 bill flew into my hands oh a $300 bill I ca buy some candy for my new friends.


Zoe
3/3/2022 03:03:21 pm

Name:Victora
Favorite food : Pizza
3 personality traits: Kind,Funny,Smart
A flaw: She is scared of pencils
It was Victora's frist day of grade 4 and as always was not excited because she has to use a pencil. As she walked into her classroom shaking her teacher Mr. Steltman said Hi then Mr.Steltman said everyone get out a pencil we are going to do some math to get the year started. Then Victora got a pencil and then she floped to the floor and ran out of the classroom than she walked back in and said sorry I am really really scared of pencils and the whole class laghed even the teacher and Mr.Steltman said is some kind of joke and on Victora's frist day of school she got sent home and she never retruned.
THE END

Lexus
3/3/2022 03:36:14 pm

Name bobby
Favourite food pizza 🍕
3 personality traits kind, funny, brave,
Flaw dos not know when to stop eating 🍽
It was Bobby’s first day of school and he was so overjoyed to go.
Mr. steltman is bobby teacher for the year. Walking in he got so excited because he remembered it was pizza day and then got so disappointed when he remembered he forgot to do his homework 📚. And booby kindly told mr. steltman that he forgot His homework. And booby day got better better and better. And that was the end of his first day of fourth Grade.

max
3/3/2022 04:17:10 pm

my character's name is elon musk
he has giant smelly feet.
he wheres an office coat.
he wheres cool glasses.
he also hes blue skin
he is allergic to smoke & steam
he dosen't where underwhere

max
3/3/2022 04:28:02 pm

his favoraite food is chocolate
he has no crush
he is 18 years old
his favoraite game is mariocart
his favoraite movie is star wars ep lV
he dosen't like feathers
he only drinks coffee
he lives in a mansion
he broke his leg

Lucy
3/3/2022 04:50:22 pm

My caracter's name is Brother Paul
Brother Paul's favorite food is macaroni and cheese
His 3 caracter traits are: nice,funny and friendly
Brother Paul's flaw is he won't eat any food other then mac and cheese

It was the first day of grade 4 and Brother Paul was so exited to meet his new teacher! When he got there he saw his teacher. When he walked into the classroom and his teacher said " Hi my name is Mr. Steltman! I will be your teacher for the year! " Brother Paul loved his new teacher. After the morrning ended it was time for lunch and he opened his lunch bag and what did he see, NO MACORONI AND CHEESE! Brother Paul was so mad and he did not eat for the 2 lunch breaks. Then the day was over and Brother Paul Went home and said I thought this was going to be the best day ever but......It was not. THE END

Emmett
3/3/2022 04:59:19 pm

Name: Bobby Sue
Favourite Food: McDonalds burger
3 traits: silly, kind, happy
Flaw: swears and screams when he gets angry
Difficult situation: run away and hide

It is my first day of grade 4 and I am nervous and happy. I am nervous because I am going to have a new teacher and I might not be with my friends. I am happy because I get a new teacher and I might see my friends. It's all so confusing. I really hope mom packed a burger for lunch.

Maddie
3/3/2022 05:14:27 pm

My characters name is Brooklyn Chrome
Favourite Food: Pears
3 personality traits: Funny sweet, kind
Scared of computers, she thinks they are going to blow up when you types.
Scared to go to school because she is new.


Brooklyn walked in the the classroom shy and scared, not knowing what her first day was going to be like. Brooklyn said "hello" to the teacher and gave him a pear to show her kindness. The Teacher said' "Thank you Brooklyn, you may take your seat." "Good Morning class! My name is Mr. Steltman👨‍🏫 I will be your teacher for the year. We are going to start a project all about your self. Go get a chrome book Open up google classroom. It is on the top in of stream. Brooklyn asked Mr. Steltman if she could use a pees of paper.Mr. Steltman said'' you can''. the day was done Brooklyn want home it was a good day. Brooklyn thought what will happen tomorrow?

bully maguire drazen
3/4/2022 07:51:20 am

this human name iz called bully maguire he was fist called tobey maguire tobey liked reading and math and science language his fav food was stake medium rare everyone at high school was bullying him he became more smarter time passed now hes a bully maguire he wears no more glasses and he wears EMO HAIR ! he bully everyone at high school just becuz them

Levi
3/6/2022 09:25:02 am

Name: Tyranitar
Favourite food: cheeseburger
Personality trait: adventurous, happy and cool
Flaw: when he gets mad he fights people
difficult situation: will say do homework tomorrow but he never does

On his first day of grade 4 Tyranitar was hoping that he got a cheeseburger for his first lunch, yum. When he was walking to school he was super happy to meet his new teacher. He was not happy because he didn't know the people in his class. Some older grade 6 kids were teasing Tyranitar so then he got mad and punched the bullies. Then at recess he was doing parkouring over the climber and that made him feel better.

Keira
3/6/2022 09:54:02 am

My character's name is Issy
Issy's three personality traits are funny, kind and crafty
Issy's favourite food is McDonland's fries
Issy's flaw is she doesn’t like cats

The day before Issy's first day of grade 4 Issy and her mom went to get a dog, she named her dog Lilly. On Issy's first day of grade 4 she woke up and was so excited to go and see if her friend's were in her class when she got to school turn's out she had the best teacher ever all of her friends were in her class. Her teacher's name was Mr.Feltman and when she got in to her classroom she was worried about Lilly wondering if she would wreck her house or not. She had a great day and when she got home her mom took cookies out of the oven to celebrate her first day of grade 4!

bryce
3/6/2022 04:41:22 pm

his name is:bob the frog:or you can say bob
he is funny,weird and forgetful.
he likes to eat: endys : you end your life there because the is so good.
he does not like : frogs :
bob gets dressed straight away then when he looks at his watch he is late for school.
After he goes to walk to the school and after he forgets that he didn't eat breakfast so then he ate a bagel from his lunch.
After he realized he was rushing he looked at the clock and it showed 8:37 then he realized that he forget to change his clock and watch.
Then when he got to his school room he saw a frog and he had to sit beside the frog.
Then he forgot to tell the teacher that he doesn't like other frogs.
After all the science and math it was finally break.
He goes to get his lunch but then he remembers he ate his bagel so instead he only had a couple snacks to eat.
Then school was over.

Jaelen
3/6/2022 06:50:29 pm

name: Jake
Favorite food: pizza
Flaw: cooking
Personality: gamer cool funny
It was Jake first day of grade four he was excited to make new friends but when he got to class he was stopped by a bully named Ronin he said I need to get in there Ronin said why Jake said to Learn Ronin said not today and put him in trash can and said see you in class Jake Was scared but he still went in to class but he had to next to Ronin. Jake was bullied all day untill home time he ran back home faster then sonic and flash mixed he had the worst day of school.

isabela
3/7/2022 05:58:27 pm

Name: Joe Sue (Call him Joe)
Favorite food: Pizza and subway
personality traits: kind, sweet,funny
Flaw: He loves making new friends


One day Joe woke up and got ready for his first day of school. He was so excited to meet his new teacher, at his new school.
Joe walked to school, on the way it started to rain and then started to snow when the rain ended. Joe LOVES the snow! So when he got to school he went into his new class room and went to talk to his teacher Cameron Steltman. He asked him where he was sitting in class and his teacher told him he’s sitting in the front row of the class. At break the snow did not stop and like I said before, he LOVES SNOW! He asked some kids if he could play with them and they said sure. 20 mins later break ended, then he had art and then the time had come he had to go home. Joe said bye to his classmates and teacher, his teacher said we have two new kid‘s soon, Joe was so happy cause he was thinking him and the new kid’s could be friends. Then Joe started to walk home wondering what his next day would be like for him. He was very very excited for his next day with the new kid’s.

Isabela
3/8/2022 04:42:43 am

Name: Joe Sue (Call him Joe)
Favorite food: Pizza and subway
personality traits: kind, sweet,funny
Flaw: He loves making new friends


One day Joe woke up and got ready for his first day of school. He was so excited to meet his new teacher, at his new school.
Joe walked to school, on the way it started to rain and then started to snow when the rain ended. Joe LOVES the snow! So when he got to school he went into his new class room and went to talk to his teacher Cameron Steltman. He asked him where he was sitting in class and his teacher told him he’s sitting in the front row of the class. At break the snow did not stop and like I said before, he LOVES SNOW! He asked some kids if he could play with them and they said sure. 20 mins later break ended, then he had art and then the time had come he had to go home. Joe said bye to his classmates and teacher, his teacher said we have two new kid‘s soon, Joe was so happy cause he was thinking him and the new kid’s could be friends. Then Joe started to walk home wondering what his next day would be like for him. He was very very excited for his next day with the new kid’s.


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