A SCARY Post!
As we are coming up to a SCARY event this week, I thought I would use this picture of myself from a few years ago to TERRIFY you, and get you into the right mindset for your weekly blog writing. This week you have a choice of what to write about. Using PROPER PARAGRAPH form, you can either write from the perspective of a child going through a very scary haunted house for the first time, or, you can describe the scariest costume you can imagine. The goal for this is for you to practice your descriptive writing and using different, powerful adjectives that will help you TERRIFY your reader. Transport them to the haunted house, or create the costume in the mind so they quake with fear. Good Luck! MWAH-AH-AH!
10/23/2014 05:46:27 am
A scary costume I have actually seen! It was my brothers, he was a zombie! He had a fake iron axe with blood on the blade sticking in his head. He had a fake eye dropping out of its socket with a trail of blood following it down. He had rips in his clothes he had blood soaked into his white shirt. He had blood on the knees of his pants. And he had a friend with him that looked exactly like him!
OOOOIIIIIII EEEEETS SEAN-E BOIIIII
10/23/2014 06:02:46 am
It was my very first time going for halloween. I was with my big brother and we both had a pillowcase full of candy! "trick or Treat!?" I would say as my brother said "Smell my feet" right after.
Oi EETS Sean-E BOOOOIIII
10/23/2014 06:04:10 am
Sry it's so long :3
10/23/2014 10:25:28 am
10/25/2014 03:16:56 am
10/23/2014 08:53:54 am
Nice descriptive words!
10/24/2014 06:19:49 am
straight up WOW
KATE is so scary!!!
10/23/2014 07:51:35 am
THE SCARIEST COSTUME EVER!!!!!!!!
10/24/2014 06:24:37 am
10/25/2014 03:18:03 am
I am terrified
10/23/2014 11:42:54 am
one night on Halloween me and my friend bob went trike or treating. bob was terrified of grave yards so i thought i would prank him. i would do that by putting a blind fold on him and and saying that i would bring him to the best place to trike or treat but i would actually be bringing him to a grave yard. when we got there and i took of the blind fold bob was so scared he wet his pants and fainted. i was laughing so hard but then bob got back up. he looked different, he had red eyes and pale skin. he started to run at me saying give me your soul. i got so scared i ran in the grave yard house. when i got in i saw a bearded man with a lantern and a spear in the other. the man said what are you doing here i told him what happened to bob. after hearing what i said he grabbed my hand and brought me to a room with a metal door. inside was a closet full of weapons and security cameras that watched the front door. i ask him what was going on, he said this place was cursed. what was the curse i ask, the man said every Halloween a ghost comes and poses the first person to touch the property. he said bob could be saved only if he was stabbed in the heart then the ghost would leave his body and and his heart would heal then he would be normal again. when i herd that i took his spear and ran out the door to go and save my friend but before i could go outside he was standing in front of the door. i charged at him with my spear but he broke it. when i picked up the half of the spear with the blade, the stick that was connected to the blade was about the size of my hand. i took the half of the broken spear that still had the blade on it and ran at bob and stabbed the heart. a ghost came out of bob and flew away, bob was on the ground i thought he was dead but he was just passed out. i dragged him home and lay him down on the couch. he woke up and said what happened, i lieded to him and said you passed out after seeing a scary custom. he believed me and said you wanna go trike or treat before its to late because i have to go to bed soon. i said o.k. the end
10/24/2014 06:22:43 am
10/24/2014 07:16:17 am
Walking up to the house, the house everyone talks about, the house only the cool kids go to. Teagan by my side dressed in her vampire costume dripping with fake blood and gore, leaving a trail behind us. She takes out her phone and tells me to go, she was going to film me since Jules was on vacation in Cuba for 2 weeks, I walk up to the gate, slowly advancing, wishing I could sprint home and curl up with my German shepard, Maddy, but no I couldn't chicken out now, not while Teagan was filming. Just than Chase, the most popular guy in school walked up behind me with his girlfriend, Julia VanRavens, the most popular girl at school. In my head I was screaming, If I chickened out now the whole school would know and I would get teased forever, so I walked up to the gate and opened it only to hear the most bloodcurdling screech I ever heard, clenching my teeth trying not to scream I popped a candy in my mouth to help keep the scream in, than I slowly walked forward and saw figures in the mist from the smoke machine walking towards me, hold plastic weapons varying from axes to swords. I quicken my pace a little but not enough to notice. My candy I was sucking on was almost gone and I had to scream so badly so I began to run for the porch and tripped on a loose stone, I could hear Julia and Chase's laughter behind me but I got up and kept running when I got to the porch there was a zombie witch sitting in a rocking wicker chair holding a pot of candy. I got closer and she handed me a paper that said;
10/25/2014 03:31:49 am
The scariest Halloween costume would be a costume that was like a skeleton but still fleshy and the nose is small but pointy and has a small red sphere on the end of it so it looks like a creepy clown too and it looks drippy like it is all wet and has come from murky waters.
That girl with an 's' in her name
10/26/2014 07:00:21 am
10/26/2014 11:18:09 am
is this Sandra?
hannah <3's halloween
10/26/2014 09:33:10 am
walking into a haunted house for the first time!
10/26/2014 11:17:22 am
As I knocked very light on the big door with spider weds and creepy craly spiders I walked bake to my friends fast I was about to pee my pants! the door creaked open my friends dared me to go in but I wasn't one to turn down dares, so what do I do... stupidly I went in but I went in proud. I walked up to the door went up the stars and took one big golp! I walk in a and and staged getting puled in! the lady gave me some candy and offered a cooky and milk I ate the cooky but left the milk it makes me gassy, Im lactose and tolerant. as it got darker and later i just alkyd out when no one was looking and went home! and the next day i was so popular for just walking in that house!
10/26/2014 11:47:06 pm
So my costome is a pie with blood and a knife so skarry man and it has spegety and hot dogs pises all over the kniffe if your not skarryed you have no soul! :(
10/27/2014 05:47:38 am
My costume last year was a terrifying zombie. It had a mask with dark hollow eyes with blood dripping out of the sockets. The mask also had bloodied bandages around it. The jacket and pants had tears with open gory wounds. The gloves had almost no flesh, all you could see was bruised bones. As for the shoes, they were torn and dirty scuffed up sneakers.
Faith Moonro... SCARIEST COSTUME
10/27/2014 05:56:03 am
As I lurk through Party City I'm looking for the most scariest, horrendous, make little kids pee when they see me, costume. I couldn't find what I was looking for so I snatched a gallon of fake blood, some fake scars and a few more creepy things and got out, but of course I wasn't looking for "creepy" things I wanted, the most scariest, horrendous, make little kids pee when they see me, costume. The night of Halloween I got dressed in all white, put on a zipped scar that you could see the blood and my skin peeling of with a zipper at the top. I then went outside to my backyard and poured the gallon of fake blood on me then, went inside. Just before 6:00pm, I went outside and set up a table that said
10/27/2014 06:53:41 am
My idea of the scariest costume would be this...
10/27/2014 07:35:38 am
........ I walked into the house and saw the dead bodies on the floor. The house was well furnished but every thing as covered in blood. There was a pool outside but defiantly not the one I would want to swim in, it was filled with blood and since I read the wall I new that I was to late to save the 100 people whose blood was mixed in the pool. I read further and it said 'watch your back' in blood. I went upstairs and heard a little girl saying '100,100,100,100' again and again. I went up to her and told her that I would get her out of here but she took a rope and took me into the world of darkness, I could here her saying '101,101,101,' as I took my last breath. Then I woke up realizing it was a dream I sighed with relief and went trick or treating with my brother and into the haunted house but I froze I could her a girl and she was not just any girl she was very terrifying.
10/28/2014 05:41:22 am
As i opened the door the creek it made made my heart beat 10x faster not that it was or anything as i took myself into the house the floor was just as loud as the dolr if not louder the bigger noise i made i thought the scary spirits would come get me.I heard a strange noise i thaught it was a cat but i couldnt be sure. So i just left muhahah
10/29/2014 07:18:34 am
(written in the prospective of my littlest sister)
10/29/2014 10:38:51 am
I think that the SCAREIST Halloween costume is a circus clown.
10/30/2014 06:24:36 am
The scariest costume would be a vicious clown. It would have a blood axe in it's head. There would be sharp, deadly and ugly razor sharp teeth like a white shark. It's eyes would be gushing blood out. The clown would be wearing a black ninja suit, while the pants would be all colors of the rainbow in polka dots.
U even 360 noscope bro? (Gav)
10/30/2014 09:22:57 am
The scariest costume to me would be mr Steltman in a wig wearing a Justin Bieber mask and singing BABY (oh gosh) and mr Otten wearing a Harry styles costume (great) those would be horrifying!
10/30/2014 09:40:18 am
The scariest costume for me would be in a white and black mask and there is somthing you press to make blood come out of your face
10/30/2014 09:52:52 am
Humren was in the house, the haunted house. No one was their accept for Humren, and the dead bodies. Humren was dared to go explore the house by his friends that were no longer alive. He got into the kitchen all there was in their were a whole bunch of dead Chuckies lying on the countertop he got a little shiver when he heard a chain saw running and people’s piercing screams, and thats when he turned around. He got to the doors tried opening them but it just wouldn’t budge, and then he heard a faint creaking noise coming from the stairs and thats when he knew he had to make a decision so he ran through the spider webs and then popped into the basement, and locked the door behind him. Im sure that wasn’t the best of his options,but theres no turning back now. He was there in the basement no way to turn back but then he heard the door handle jiggle,but that wasn’t the most on his mind because a splatter hit him a splatter of blood and then in then snap of a finger killer clown was staring right into the depths of his pupils, But then he woke up.
10/30/2014 09:58:18 am
I bring my little brother Luke for trick or treating. We are not going in that spine-chilling hair-raising horrifying haunted house are we he says? I don't answer. I blind fold his eyes and say do you want candy he howls YES i say here is the house i lock the gate behind us. we enter a monster size house with no lights on. My spine chilled the house has 2 windows on the left side the roof looks like a mini jet landing pad and the door looks like it has never been open in 20 century's and then Luke says are we there yet Ethan he tells me. I said yes, the house has a stretched path of black 12x12 stones to the door the house is completely black and the roof has no lights to indicate where the landing pad is.The house seems like is not expecting visitors i wonder if wee should turn back but then there was a giant lock that was shimmering black we were trapped we finally reached the completely black with a picture of a cauldron like it will eat you than knocked because the was no door bell. The door opened by its self i took the blindfolds off of Luke he said does this place give candy? I said yes. I walk in then witches came out of no where and BOO!!!
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